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Number of posts : 45 Age : 30 Location : haz zebbug malta Job/hobbies : tokio hotel ,go out with my friends and make new friends Registration date : 2008-02-08
| Subject: Re: I'll Die For You [Discontinued] Fri May 09 2008, 22:22 | |
| the more u write the more i love this fan fiction
wen u can write moreee plsssssssss !!!!! | |
| | | Revenge
Number of posts : 2087 Age : 33 Location : INDIA Job/hobbies : MCR + TH LOVING Humor : sarcastic Registration date : 2008-04-21
| Subject: Re: I'll Die For You [Discontinued] Mon May 12 2008, 20:22 | |
| Title: I'll Die For You Part: 12 Characters: Alex, Bill, Kim, Tom Dedication: KIMMY!, Rachel, Sarah, Luana, svety, Chloe(cuz u r just an amazing writer, and i really wish to learn a lot from you) and my lovely kaulitz twins...love u all always Disclaimer: FAKE
ENJOY and dont hate me please.
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“Are you serious…16?” I mouthed, not being able to voice anything loudly because we were in the middle of our English class. Bill nodded, suppressing his laughter passing me another note. I stared at his writing. I couldn’t gulp those facts down. Tom had managed 16 one night stands in 3 weeks. He had managed to have sex with a different girl all nights except for 5. “That boy is a nutcase!” I wrote and gave the sheet to back to Bill. He shook his head while reading it, a tiny grin forming on his face. The bell rang, indicating the end of school. We waited for the room to empty out a bit, before moving out.
“I fought with him yesterday over this again. He just thinks I’m being foolish for asking him to slow down a bit, but he always misses the point. I just don’t want him to be in trouble” he said very slowly.
“I know Bill, but just let him be. I worry about him too at times and I’m just a friend. I can understand your position, but there is nothing in this world you can do to change him. You will just have to wait for the one girl who will set him right.”
“Is Kim all right about it?”
“Wh - why would Uhm…Kim care about it?” I stuttered.
“I’m not blind Alex, I know she likes him and to be honest, I thought Tom liked her too, but things didn’t turn out the way I wanted them to.”
We walked most of the way back in silence. I was thankful that Kim wasn’t a part of our conversation, because even with Tom's Casanova personality, she refused to give up on liking him. And even if she did pretend as if it didn’t affect her, it still did hurt her a lot.
Thinking about Kim and dragging my bag on the sidewalk I took the right turn leading to my house, only to find Eddie blocking the way.
“What are you doing here?” I demanded and before I could say anything else, Bill gave a horrified gasp. I turned to look in the direction he was and saw the familiar dreadlocks fitted so perfectly under the cap.
Seizing his moment Eddie vanished, throwing the bat he had in a corner. I didn’t want to think about what he had done to Tom and ran to him. He was so lifeless, shriveled up in the mud.
“Tom – Tom, please get up” Bill uttered and turned him over. He was bleeding from innumerable places. His nose bled and there was one large bruise under his eye, probably from the bat. His hands were covered with the crimson tide, flowing out of a big gash on the underside of his arm. He had been knocked out of his senses. Carefully Bill picked him up and took him into my house, which was nearby. I opened the door as fast as I could, and Bill hurried into my room. Meanwhile I searched for the first aid kit to help Tom wondering what he must have done to make Eddie so violent.
“Is he breathing?” I asked Bill
“Yeah, but very slowly” he stuttered. The black surrounding his cat like eyes ran down his cheek. “Oh Bill, please don’t cry, he’ll be alright, I promise” I reassured hugging him tightly. He cried uncontrollably in my arms. I felt so sad and at the same time angry at that motherfucker who had done this.
Letting go off Bill, I attended to Tom's wounds. Kim came in at that very moment, and literally shrieked
“Oh god what happened to him?” she asked
I explained her everything in short, simultaneously cleaning his wounds. he gasped with pain, as the chemicals washed over his cut open skin. He was still unconscious, but he could feel the pain. Bill sat on the other side of the bed and held his hands.
“You’ll be fine Tom, just hold my hand, you’ll be fine” he muttered.
The cut on his arm was deeper than I had thought, but not deep enough to admit him in a hospital. Bill was horrified to see the length of the wound and cried even more after seeing it. My sheets turned a dull shade of red as his blood dripped on them. Quickly Kim bandaged it after applying the medicine. She too was sobbing and hugged me.
“Eddie will pay” I whispered to myself. He had just crossed his line.
Bill’s *POV*
Watching Tom bleed in front of me was unbearable, but I had to be with him. He was in so much pain and he couldn’t even tell us. I wiped off my tears and watched as Alex and Kim patched him up.
Time passed at snail pace as the three of us waited in silence for him to wake up. Kim dozed off in Alex’s lap after a while. I kept on stroking his hand telling him I was there. Inside I prayed for him, hoping that nothing major had happened.
“Has he broken any bones?” I asked after a while
“No, he was lucky to get away with these cuts. Had we reached late, it might have been a different story.” She replied.
“This is what I always worry about. The trouble he invites wherever he goes, just because he has a way with girls.”
She said nothing, but I felt like I knew what was going on in her mind. She had a fierce determination on her face – the determination to kill.
Day turned into night. The sun hid behind all the high rise buildings, throwing the spot light on the full moon and the twinkling stars, making the night time sky look flawless. We hardly changed our positions, except for Alex, who finally gave in to Kim’s weight, and removed her lap from under Kim. Sadly it woke her up.
“How long have I been sleeping?” she yawned
“Close to four hours” I replied, hearing a voice so different from my own.
“Oh lord its seven in the evening!”
“Yep”
“Did – did he wake up?”
“No, but he looks a lot better than he did before”
“Do you guys want any food?” Alex intervened looking weary. Mum called up to say that she won't be coming home tonight, so I’d have to order.”
Again we waited, while the order arrived. My whole body ached, but I didn’t complain, because Tom was in more pain than I was. We left Tom to have dinner, but Kim insisted on sitting next to him all the while, leaving Alex and me to carry on a conversation. Clearly we were unsuccessful at it. The awkward silence became unbearable and Alex switched on the TV.
“Why are the evening shows so unentertaining?” she cribbed
I smiled, then thanked her for doing all she did for Tom
“No, thank me when I break all 600 bones in Eddie’s body” she replied darkly, staring at the empty black screen of the television. I saw the same determination to kill in her eyes like I had when she was cleaning Tom's wounds.
We went back into the room to see Kim holding Tom's hands. Alex and I occupied the couch, our eyes fixed on him. He’d been out cold for a long time and I was beginning to get really worried. Alex gave me a reassuring smile and I closed my eyes begging god to fix everything.
I must have fallen asleep during that, because I woke up at 1 in the night to find my self still on the couch leaning on Alex, who was sleeping in an upright position, looking beautiful. Her hand was around my waist, while the other held my hand. I felt an odd peace inside me to hold her. If I could just stretch a little, I could’ve kissed her, but that move wouldn’t be appreciated. I again kept my head down on her stomach, where it had rested earlier as well. Her careful rhythmic breathing worked at putting me to sleep. I felt her softness as I curled my hands around her as well. Before shutting my eyes again, I glanced over at Kim. She was wide awake, and gave me a smile. I smiled back and drifted back into deep sleep. | |
| | | Luanagk Admin
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| Subject: Re: I'll Die For You [Discontinued] Mon May 12 2008, 23:10 | |
| AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA Eddie you ^@$^*@&^(&(^*(&^€&^^! €$%^@%$R^$%&%&*@ %^&€%^& @$%^@^%&@^&€%^&€%&*€ %^&^%*@W^&@$^*% &($^*(€%!€%€
DONT YOU DARE EDDIE TOUCH TOMMY!
Poor Tom =[ I hope he'll be Ok
Awwww Bill & Alex are rly cute =]] Mehr when you can bitte =] | |
| | | tokio hotel 4 ever
Number of posts : 45 Age : 30 Location : haz zebbug malta Job/hobbies : tokio hotel ,go out with my friends and make new friends Registration date : 2008-02-08
| Subject: Re: I'll Die For You [Discontinued] Mon May 12 2008, 23:59 | |
| hate u eddie alot !!!!!!
y did u do that to tom | |
| | | KIM[<3]T.H..Tom Admin
Number of posts : 1442 Age : 30 Location : Malta,Barmarrad,Flat483,with tom(: Job/hobbies : MUSIC,TOKIO HOTEL,writing fan fics,making pranks,going to TH fan club meetings, and laughing :D Humor : funny,suptanious und sensitive x) Registration date : 2008-01-26
| Subject: Re: I'll Die For You [Discontinued] Tue May 13 2008, 00:15 | |
| i don't like were me and tom are going im being to good to him!!!!
but F*ck u eddie i hate your guts | |
| | | Revenge
Number of posts : 2087 Age : 33 Location : INDIA Job/hobbies : MCR + TH LOVING Humor : sarcastic Registration date : 2008-04-21
| Subject: Re: I'll Die For You [Discontinued] Tue May 13 2008, 07:05 | |
| yeah i hate eddie too...lets join the eddie haters club! | |
| | | Revenge
Number of posts : 2087 Age : 33 Location : INDIA Job/hobbies : MCR + TH LOVING Humor : sarcastic Registration date : 2008-04-21
| Subject: Re: I'll Die For You [Discontinued] Tue May 13 2008, 14:35 | |
| Title: I'll Die For You Part: 13 Characters: Alex, Bill, Kim, Tom Dedication: KIMMY!, Rachel, Sarah, Luana, svety, Chloe(cuz u r just an amazing writer, and i really wish to learn a lot from you) and my lovely kaulitz twins...love u all always Disclaimer: FAKE KIMMY I know u'll love me for this! ___________________________________________________________________ Kim's *POV* I stared at Tom's face all the while searching for a thousand answers I had come to think off in the few months of knowing him. I wondered if he would ever like me, as Alex had told me, or he would continue to let his free young soul bed as many girls as possible. Tears flooded in my eyes at that thought. It pained me to have him so close, still so far. I looked up at Bill and Alex, who slept peacefully on the couch and felt happy. If there was anyone, who could help Alex forget Frank, it was Bill. I positively hoped that she would fall in love with him, but such things were unpredictable, and I could only just hope. Morning approached fast, bringing in new hope. The first rays of sun that touched Tom's face made him stir a bit. My heart literally jumped out of my body, when I saw his eye lids part to reveal those beautiful eyes. “Tom?” He turned his head and looked at me “OH MY GOD!” I yelled waking both Alex and Bill as well. Tom smiled at me, while the other two reached his bedside. “Finally you think of waking up!” Alex said, beaming. Bill had tears in his eyes, watching his brother smile. “How are you feeling?” I asked “It hurts a lot, but I feel a lot better than I was when he beat me up” he replied and turned to focus on Bill “How are you brother?” “I’m fine, what’s going to happen to me stupid?” Bill replied, holding his tears back. “You tell me, why did that asshole beat you up?” “I honestly don’t know.” “Stop lying will you” Alex cut in “No seriously! All I am aware of is that his girlfriend broke up with him, and it has nothing to do with me. It’s not my fault if I am so good looking” he laughed, repenting it later, because the wounds on his face didn’t allow him to laugh freely “Well you guys go to school, I’ll stay here” I offered all of a sudden realizing that it was a Tuesday. “NO WAY!” Bill and Alex ascertained in unison “I’m not going to school when my brother is so hurt” “And I’m not going to school alone anyway!” Alex explained. I laughed at that. Honestly we just needed a reason to bunk school and when we all had one, there was no reason to let go off it. Alex’s mom called to check on us, since she had been told about the situation. My parents were out of town, so it wasn’t necessary to tell them anything. “Mom is too going to Texas today straight from office” Alex informed, so we’re all free basically. God what a shame Tom had to get injured now.” “I have a history with bad timings” he said in his defense. “Okay, I need to get some supplied to refill the kitchen, anyone interested in coming?” she asked. “Yeah I will, I need to get clothes too, then we can take the car” Bill suggested. The plan was agreed on and they left, leaving Tom and I all alone. It was going to be a tough time for me. Tom's *POV* “Get me clothes too” I yelled hoping that Bill had heard me. My upper body was so sore; I couldn’t feel half of it at all. Kim left the room too at the same time as the other two only to return with a dozen pills in her hand. “Who is supposed to eat all of them?” “You of course, and not all of them, just a few of them” She took out three of them and handed them to me. “Which ones are they?” “One is a pain killer, the orange one is calcium and the capsule is iron” she replied, giving me a glass full of water. “And why do I need to have them?” “Well in case you didn’t notice, you’ve lost a lot of blood and energy, so its to keep you healthy in a way” “Can't food do it?” “No.” I gave her puppy eyes, hoping she would not give me the pills then, but she was harder to crack. “You got two options, either eat them now nicely, or have them forced down your throat by Alex. It’s not a pretty thing when she does that okay, so do what suits you” I wasn’t left with too much of a choice, so I quietly gulped the huge pills down. Kim went and sat down on the couch, falling asleep immediately. For the first time I noticed her face carefully. She was pretty to look at, but I somehow didn’t feel like asking her to jump onto bed with me. She was innocent and I was a bastard. I didn’t want to hurt her, but I wanted her. I sat up straight on the bed, straining my hand and flinching. She came to my side immediately, helping me up. She was so close, I couldn’t let go off the moment. I felt her touch on my hand, her hands slipping away but I held them again. She sat besides me, not looking up, letting me handle her soft fingers. I let go off her hands and touched her face. She was wearing a lip ring, I hadn’t noticed before. My hands slipped on her skin like a feather on silk. I willed her to look at me, wanting to stare in her eyes. The instant that happened I knew what I had to do. She was captivating; I didn’t want to look away. I inched closer and touched her lips with mine, our rings colliding with the same speed and vigor. My face hurt a bit, but the pain was overpowered by the satisfaction I experienced. Kim was going to be mine. okay..i might be doing a vanishing act for 5 or 6 days cuz my comp needs to be repaired, so please dont lose patience..pwetty pwease... and u guys are still not reading the othe story i posted with tom..no fair!..plus u guys really have to read ravynk's stories...thy're just amazing!.. please guys read and comment..u know i love you. hehe being very cheeky i guess. | |
| | | KIM[<3]T.H..Tom Admin
Number of posts : 1442 Age : 30 Location : Malta,Barmarrad,Flat483,with tom(: Job/hobbies : MUSIC,TOKIO HOTEL,writing fan fics,making pranks,going to TH fan club meetings, and laughing :D Humor : funny,suptanious und sensitive x) Registration date : 2008-01-26
| Subject: Re: I'll Die For You [Discontinued] Tue May 13 2008, 18:45 | |
| waaaaaaaaaaaaaaa omgggggg pav I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *hugz* now this is more like it!! dammmm why cant this be real eh?eh? shoottttt take your time i have SOME patience but you'll have to make up for it xxxxxxx | |
| | | Luanagk Admin
Number of posts : 1108 Age : 30 Location : Zurrieq, Malta Job/hobbies : Tokio Hotel & playin the guitar Humor : =/ Registration date : 2008-01-26
| Subject: Re: I'll Die For You [Discontinued] Wed May 14 2008, 01:23 | |
| Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Kim & Tom what a cute couple =]]]
But pls Tom don't treat her like all the B*tcHEs
she loves you =] | |
| | | [-rejxil.TH-]
Number of posts : 593 Age : 30 Location : Paola - Zimmer 483 :P Job/hobbies : TOKIO HOTEL :p Humor : everything :P Registration date : 2008-02-24
| Subject: Re: I'll Die For You [Discontinued] Sun May 18 2008, 14:16 | |
| At last forum is ok for me :D This is greatt.. when i have time I post mine too :D love you pav great jobby :D | |
| | | RavynK Admin
Number of posts : 3334 Age : 34 Location : Bugibba, Malta Job/hobbies : listening to music, being creative, writing :D Humor : Witty and sarcastic Registration date : 2008-05-07
| Subject: Re: I'll Die For You [Discontinued] Sun May 18 2008, 14:33 | |
| So, as usual, good story, good ideas, good way to execute them. A few errors here and there, nothing tooooo major just little bits and pieces! Like I said before you're a good writer, you write from the heart and I can see you are committed to this fic!! I look forward to reading more AND OMG!!! I can't believe you dedicated this to me and suggested people should read my fics *does the crazy clapping Bill does before hugging you insanely* You're an amazing writer as well!!! I hope you can learn from me as well, I love to help people, especially when they have as much potential and talent as you do!!!! | |
| | | Revenge
Number of posts : 2087 Age : 33 Location : INDIA Job/hobbies : MCR + TH LOVING Humor : sarcastic Registration date : 2008-04-21
| Subject: Re: I'll Die For You [Discontinued] Wed May 21 2008, 19:39 | |
| ^^ thank you for reading them Chloe...it really means a LOT to me! and kim...i am so sure id make up for it!! Title: I'll Die For You Part: 14 Characters: Alex, Bill, Kim, Tom Dedication: KIMMY!, Rachel, Sarah, Luana, svety, Chloe( and my lovely kaulitz twins...love u all always...plz be in sweden when i go there!..pwetty pwease! Disclaimer: FAKE ___________________________________________________________ Eh – what?” I asked again, hardly able to hear what Kim was whispering. “He kissed me!” “And you’re saying that in front of him?” “NO! I’m in the bathroom” “God was it that bad?” “Alex” she wailed. “Stop being so mean alright” “Hey I’m not being mean! If you tell me that you’re in the bathroom after you kiss a guy – what the hell else is the first thing that will come to my mind?” She didn’t argue back, instead she just went onto explain how good the kiss was. I couldn’t contain my laughter when she gave me all the dirty details, not because I found what she was saying funny, but I found Bill's expression funny. He had the most ridiculous grin on his face, making me double over. “Kimmy we’re just heading home so wait for another 15 – 20 minutes please” I heard a soft click on the other side and parted my phone from my ears, which had started hurting. Before Bill could question me about anything regarding what Kim had said to me, I asked him to go home without me “Why – where are you going?” he asked, looking at me intently. “Uhm, I have some work to do” “Its okay, I'm not rushing to head home anyway” he winked, making me laugh again. “Okay fine” I asked him to stop at a flower shop first where I bought 5 white lilies hen asked him to head for the cemetery. The journey was more or less quiet, except for the music playing in the background going pretty much unnoticed. It started playing Broken by Seether and my eyes automatically filled with tears. Broken was the first song Frank had sung for me and it always had a special meaning for us both. I didn’t realize when I started singing the song, but I did regret it ending. Wiping my tears discretely I looked up and saw the cemetery grounds coming closer as the trees sped by. I felt Bill's eyes on me, and turned to look at him. He didn’t shrink back, instead gave me a smile, before pulling over Bill's *POV*“Because I’m broken, when I’m lonesome, And I don’t feel right, when you've gone away The worst is over now and we can breathe again I wanna hold you high and steal my pain away There’s so much left to learn and no one left to fight I wanna hold you high and steal your pain Because I'm broken when I’m open And I don’t feel like, that I'm strong enough Because I’m broken, when I’m lonesome, And I don’t feel right, when you've gone away”Alex's sweet voice joined the chorus, and I was swept away by it. I glanced at her briefly, her eyes were shut tightly, as if repelling any light that tried to enter and brighten her world. With each passing verse of the song, the hurt that she faced became clearer to me. I waned to hold her and tell her that she would always have me, but our friendship was more important to me than my own feelings. I absorbed all the music that played in a trance like state. I didn’t want to know anything else except for the music and her voice. It felt like magic to me, pulling me deeper and deeper into the mere of her love. I tried many times to convince myself that I didn’t have all those feelings for her, that I didn’t love her, that I didn’t want to see her lively allure everyday of my life, but I had been unsuccessful at every attempt. Her voice touched my numb senses again, easing me. “Because I'm broken when I’m open And I don’t feel like, that I'm strong enough Because I’m broken, when I’m lonesome, And I don’t feel right, when you've gone away
Because I’m broken, when I’m lonesome, And I don’t feel right, when you've gone away”The song ended allowing the silence to creep back again. I avoided looking at her while she cleared her tears. I stopped a few paces away from the gates and helped her out of the ‘mini truck’ as I called it. It was such a huge car! I followed her inside, ignoring the sudden explosion of goose bumps on my skin. We walked on a path in the centre, covered with wild grass. Vines crept all over the graves, leaving only small areas exposed. Amidst them one grave was completely untouched and Alex approached it slowly. The white flowers in her hands were placed down on the gravestone. She bent down herself letting her tears flow freely. I traced her movements as her hands touched a photograph, fixed on the memorial. I presumed him to be Frank and sat besides her. “I forgot to tell you, Mikey found a girl in Italy, but I think you may already know” she whispered to him as if he was alive in front of her. I was absorbed by Frank’s face as if he was trying to tell me something. His eyes spoke for him, but I didn’t know why I felt as if he wanted to talk to me. I just stared at his hazel eyes, slowly understanding why she loved him so much. Just one picture was enough to tell me how much they had loved each other. A smile spread on Alex’s faces, making a dent on one cheek, and she got up. We walked out in the same silence that had greeted us. A slow wind surpassed us, bidding us goodbye. “Frank was happy to see you” she told me, once we neared her house. It was a bit unnerving to hear that, but I suppose even in death, he hadn’t forgotten her. “Well does he approve of us?” I asked smiling “Of course he does, even before I did” she replied, examining her black and white converse very closely. We reached home which seemed empty when we first entered it, but later on realized that both Tom and Kim had fallen asleep on each other. “Oh they look so cute” she awed, and put a blanket on them, pulling me out of the room as well. I was actually in shock because I had never expected Tom to be interested in one girl. The whole day I sat in the other room, while Alex remained out all day long. I was getting an odd feeling about her behavior actually, because she seemed excessively excited about something. As the night sky dawned on us, she could hardly sit still. “Are you feeling okay Alex?” “Never felt better” Tom and Kim didn’t wake up at all; it seemed to me as though they were too comfortable in each others arms already! Alex and I ate our dinner, while watching John Tucker Must Die. I fell asleep on the couch for a while after that, only to wake in complete darkness an hour later. “Alex?” I called after switching the light on. She wasn’t in the hall, or in any of the rooms. I went into the backyard, and saw her climbing out of the fence. Running to the front door, I caught her in time “Where the fuck are you going at midnight?” I demanded off her. “Can I explain after I come?” “No, because you're not going anywhere!” “Bill, I need to do this, please just let me go. I’m not getting myself into any kind of trouble or anything” “Okay, then I am coming with you” “No, Bill – “Decide, inside or outside” She gave a low frustrated grunt, and started walking again, holding my hand, I wished our time together would stop being so overwhelmingly quiet. There was no other sound except for our panting. We walked into complete darkness, guided by her torch. The street lights were all out, and walking aimlessly, not knowing where I was headed to, was bloodcurdling. “Can I at least know where we are going?” I asked running out of patience stopping in my tracks. An evil grin spread on her face “Did I ever tell you how sweet revenge is Bill?” I didn’t like what she said and I surely didn’t like what she wanted to do. “Well, its your brother we’re doing this for Bill, come on, and plus, Eddie deserves it and if you wont do it with me, I’d be forced to smack you on the head, leave you on the road and go ahead with my evil plan to take over the world” She made me cackle and looking at her expressions I was positively convinced that she was going to take over the world. She took my hand quickly and ran into the darkness a large bag hanging on her shoulder. Turning a bend she suddenly ducked, causing me to fall on her. It was uneasy, and I frantically pulled myself up, apologizing in an undertone. She crawled on all fours, holding the flashlight in her mouth, her eyes fixed on her target, which were hardly 50 paces away. The gleaming red car came into my focus as well, and an overpowering feeling of mischief swept over me as well. Alex set her bag on the ground, and asked me “pink or lime green?” “Lime green” I replied wondering what she was about to do. I saw her take out a paint container and giggled, while helping her open it at the same time. She toppled all of its contents on the red Mercedes. I wanted to scream with laughter watching the paint spread on the top slowly. She pulled on a pair of surgical gloves and gave me a pair as well. She had the keys to the car and slowly opened the door. I became a silent spectator watching her grease the steering wheel, fill the foot space with water weed and cut across the length of the leather seats to expose the fillings. With a satisfied look she nodded at me and handed me the bag. There was a whole lot of glitter and paste, so I decided to leave a mark of my own. I covered the whole front glass of his car with multi colored glitter. Alex kept on laughing silently asking me to hurry up. When I was done with my designing, we cleared the whole place up, not leaving anything behind and ran as if a thousand Dobermans had been send to track us. Within half an hour of leaving the house, we were back, jumping in through the backyard fence. She collapsed on the grass and I sat besides her catching my breath as well. “This one was for you too Frankie” she breathed “in love and death” “Where did you get the keys from though?” I asked realizing that Eddie never would’ve lent it out to her “Frank had forged it a long time back. The four of us – frank, I, Gerard and Mikey had planned this revenge on Eddie ages ago, but before we could think of a time, frank died and then gee and mike left for Italy, so today, I did it for them all” She looked up at the twinkling stars and shrugged, walking towards the windows of her mothers’ room. Hurriedly she crept in, careful not to make any noise. I too got in shutting the window behind me. “Goodnight Alex” I called and headed and headed towards the door to go to the guest room on the opposite side of the hall “Don’t be silly, you’ll wake the other two up, stay in this room tonight, its fine by me.” She patted the vacant space next to her and asked me to join her. My insides bubbled with happiness as I crawled on to the bed and landed next to her. She gave me a goodnight kiss on the cheek and turned to sleep. I was a happy guy when sleep took over me as well. | |
| | | KIM[<3]T.H..Tom Admin
Number of posts : 1442 Age : 30 Location : Malta,Barmarrad,Flat483,with tom(: Job/hobbies : MUSIC,TOKIO HOTEL,writing fan fics,making pranks,going to TH fan club meetings, and laughing :D Humor : funny,suptanious und sensitive x) Registration date : 2008-01-26
| Subject: Re: I'll Die For You [Discontinued] Wed May 21 2008, 20:02 | |
| awwwwwwwwwwh finally a new chppie welcome back we missed you huugz
and omgggg awsomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee chppppppp moreeeeeeeeee!!!!!!! | |
| | | Luanagk Admin
Number of posts : 1108 Age : 30 Location : Zurrieq, Malta Job/hobbies : Tokio Hotel & playin the guitar Humor : =/ Registration date : 2008-01-26
| Subject: Re: I'll Die For You [Discontinued] Wed May 21 2008, 20:34 | |
| Gott that song is really nice
i had to listen to it while reading the chappie =]
Oh - I <3 the sweet revenge part ihihihi xD | |
| | | Revenge
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| Subject: Re: I'll Die For You [Discontinued] Wed May 21 2008, 20:48 | |
| haha i got the sweet revenge part when i was listening to mcr...they give me really nasty thoughts at times | |
| | | Tom's .. Flying .. V
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| ThATS MY BANNER FOR THE STORY...tell me if u like it...please Title: I'll Die For You Part: 15 Characters: Alex, Bill, Kim, Tom Dedication: KIMMY!, Rachel, Sarah, Luana, svety, Chloe( and my lovely kaulitz twins...love u all always... Disclaimer: FAKE sorry guys for being gone for SOOOOOOOOOOO long, but now i am back..and i'll try to post , but next week i will be going to sweden...so i wont be coming for two weeks again...for now njoy the story..luv y'all ____________________________________________________________ Tom's *POVKim was wrapped around in my arms when I got up. Nothing of what had happened the previous day came to me immediately. And as I lowly recovered from my temporary memory loss I remembered that I had kissed her the day before. Sweet memories of that kiss came back, making my stomach do violent back flips. Kim stirred a bit, and I diverted my attention to her, stroking her face slowly. She turned around and curled up, sighing deeply even in her sleep. Bill and Alex walked into my room, looking as deranged as I was. But the instant they walked in I knew Bill was just ready to enlighten me with me some information. I knew that face of his – when he was keeping something from me, he suddenly appeared a bit bloated to me – just ready to burst. “What did you take sleeping pills?” he asked me first thing “You slept all day long!” “I don’t know, I think it was because of Kim. She’s nice to sleep with” I joked, but received a really cold stare from Alex, making me retrace my words “I mean, she’s nice to hold, like my teddy. I mean not that I ‘slept’ slept with her” My brother’s eyes had twinkled like that before. He had done something nasty and if he wasn’t going to tell me, I was going to ask him. “What is it Bill?” He looked over at Alex and smirked while she occupied the couch. Bill joined her there and suddenly started laughing, waking up Kim in that process. “What’s up you guys?” she asked rubbing her eyes, looking so cute that I wanted to peck her, but I was too scared of Alex to do that in front of her. “Nothing Kimmy” Alex winked spreading a smile on her face as well “Ah, so you did it last night” For a minute I thought it had something to do with Alex and Bill having sex, because she said it that way. “Don’t even think Tom” he warned me a second after that thought crossed me making me chuckle. That’s why I loved my brother so much he was aware of my every thought. “So then what did you do last night?” “A little revenge streak for you Tommy boy” Alex replied and gave me all the dirty details. It wasn’t amusing until she took my car as an example. “Imagine Tom, if someone puts bubble gum pink paint on your Cadillac, greases the steering, floods the foot spacing with water weeds, and pastes glitter on the glass, I’m sure you wont be a happy guy.” “You forgot about the leather seats” Bill added “Oh yeah that too” I looked at Bill incredulously, not able to believe he’d actually done all that! I mean he was the goody – goody kid, with the cleanest track record for the past 8 years, I was the bad one. Were we looking at some kind of a role reversal here? But it felt nice to know that I had a twin who was ready to put himself in trouble for me and a friend, who seemed scary, but spear headed the whole revenge plan. After two days of bed rest I felt a lot better. My body was still sore, but at least I could feel my body parts! I could even move about with a little support. Kim helped me into the front room sitting next to me and handing me the same pills she had the previous day. Alex and Bill prepared the breakfast while Kim waited for me to take in those huge pills. “Uhm…so do you think we could like hang out together after I become completely fit?” I asked “We do hang out together Tom” she replied grinning “No, just us two” “As in a date?” “Yeah as in a date” She blinked saying a yes and pecked me softly on my cheek and ran into the kitchen. Alex came a few minutes later, and settled next to me giving me my food. But I wasn’t expecting her to say what she did “You hurt Kim and I will break your bones” “Did I say I was planning to hurt her? I ‘m sorry if I did, but I don’t plan to hurt Kim, so you can stay calm” “Let’s hope it stays that way Tom” she whispered and shifted to let Kim sit with me. I have to admit, that girl was always intimidating, and I don’t even know what Bill liked her for. I mean she was okay to look at but she could get a bit menacing. But well she was still one of the best friends I had ever managed to make and I cant deny that she was really sweet when she wanted to be. Bill’s *POV*“HE JUST ASKED ME OUT!” Kim jumped into the kitchen giving me quite a fright. I hoped Tom hadn’t heard her outburst, because even though the kitchen was far from the hall, it still wasn’t sound proof. “Great, but only when he gets an okay from the doc” Alex replied kissing Kim on the cheek affectionately. The two girls amazed me. They were two completely different personalities who were so attached to each other. With me and Tom, we grew up together, so we were almost used to it, but these two had known each other for just 5 years. “You know I think Tom is actually fine now, I mean if you want you could take him home now” Kim said to me, bringing me back to reality. “no, I wouldn’t want him to get more injured while changing places, I am absolutely fine with having you guys over, and hey, I can avoid school this way” Alex giggled, making my guts summersault. She looked cute when she giggled, when she laughed, when she smiled, when she spoke, and definitely when she curled her hands around me in her sleep. I doubted I could ever tell her how much I liked her, but I lived in hope that someday she would close her chapters on frank and start liking me, that someday she would realize that I was ready to do anything for her. ********** 1 week later Tom's *POV*Okay, okay, keep cool, keep calm. Take a deep breath; nothing is going to go wrong. It’ll be perfect, just like I want it to be. The idea of a date with Kim was killing me. I had fifteen minutes to pick her up and take her to the bowling alley, because a dinner date just seemed like an awful idea. I turned to Bill for help, because after 5 girlfriends and long relationships he was a real pro at romantic stuff. “Tom since when do you stress about dates and girls? You’re always a hit with girls!” “Ever since I started preplanning my dates dude! I don’t go on dates, I just go to the freaking club and pick up any pimp I fancy, Kim isn’t a pimp, and therefore I stress.” He gave me a real cheesy grin and shrugged. “Don’t worry, you wont make a fool out of yourself, just be careful that your pants don’t fall off, or that you don’t tumble on the floor, or that your shoes don’t squeak, because that would just be sad. I picked up the nearest cushion within my reach and whacked him really hard. “You – are – not – HELPING!” He rolled on the floor laughing, showing me his little vampire teeth, irritating me more than ever. “Just relax Tom” he comforted after he was out of his hysteria “You’ll be fine, just stop stressing.” I glanced at the watch and squeaked myself, because it was time to leave. Bill gave me a confident look and winked. “Call me if there is trouble, and now get out” He threw me out, literally and shut the door. Taking in a deep breath, I started for Kim's house, hardly caring for what was going on around me. I was even annoyed at myself for liking her, because with bimbos you could have a great night and forget about her, but with girlfriends, it was a curfew situation. My fun days were definitely going to come to a close if it worked well between us. Kim's red bricked house came into my view and I stopped, readying myself for what was in store for me. Kim's mother opened the door, carrying that same contagious smile that Kim did. “Please wait, I’ll call Kim” Her mother went upstairs while Alex ran down. “Hi” she said and hugged me, something that was very unpredictable. “Wow, I never noticed but white suits you” “Thanks” Kim came down minutes later looking prettier than she usually did. “Have a nice time guys” Alex said and left It was going to be one hell of a night | |
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Number of posts : 1442 Age : 30 Location : Malta,Barmarrad,Flat483,with tom(: Job/hobbies : MUSIC,TOKIO HOTEL,writing fan fics,making pranks,going to TH fan club meetings, and laughing :D Humor : funny,suptanious und sensitive x) Registration date : 2008-01-26
| Subject: Re: I'll Die For You [Discontinued] Sun Jun 01 2008, 13:50 | |
| omgggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg!!!!!!!!!!!!moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee plssssssssssssssssssss you're killing meeeeeeeeee!!!!!! dw Tom darling im not the romantic type dont fuss xD xD and omggggg the banner is soo gooddd me <3 <3 i saved it in my tokio hotel folder xD hugzzzzz welcome bk bdw xoxoxox kuss | |
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Number of posts : 2087 Age : 33 Location : INDIA Job/hobbies : MCR + TH LOVING Humor : sarcastic Registration date : 2008-04-21
| Subject: Re: I'll Die For You [Discontinued] Sun Jun 01 2008, 14:44 | |
| thanks for reading so soon kim....and trust me u'll like ur date. | |
| | | RavynK Admin
Number of posts : 3334 Age : 34 Location : Bugibba, Malta Job/hobbies : listening to music, being creative, writing :D Humor : Witty and sarcastic Registration date : 2008-05-07
| Subject: Re: I'll Die For You [Discontinued] Sun Jun 01 2008, 14:55 | |
| Hey Pallavi! Good chapter! I love the banner as well it's beautiful! Lol I might have to start askin you to make banners for my stories I love the way you write, its nice and simple, easy to read you know! | |
| | | Revenge
Number of posts : 2087 Age : 33 Location : INDIA Job/hobbies : MCR + TH LOVING Humor : sarcastic Registration date : 2008-04-21
| Subject: Re: I'll Die For You [Discontinued] Sun Jun 01 2008, 15:18 | |
| thank u chloe...i dont mind making u a banner either! | |
| | | Tom's .. Flying .. V
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| Subject: Re: I'll Die For You [Discontinued] Sun Jun 01 2008, 16:51 | |
| looolz luve the banner its BRILLIANT and hot hehe loooooool
the story is getting better and better lool gr8 hehe | |
| | | KIM[<3]T.H..Tom Admin
Number of posts : 1442 Age : 30 Location : Malta,Barmarrad,Flat483,with tom(: Job/hobbies : MUSIC,TOKIO HOTEL,writing fan fics,making pranks,going to TH fan club meetings, and laughing :D Humor : funny,suptanious und sensitive x) Registration date : 2008-01-26
| Subject: Re: I'll Die For You [Discontinued] Sun Jun 01 2008, 20:55 | |
| - kaulitzsgirl wrote:
- thanks for reading so soon kim....and trust me u'll like ur date.
haha i used to come in the forum to check if you had posted another chp and i would realy get sad when i didn't find anything but you're backkkkkkk xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx | |
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| Subject: Re: I'll Die For You [Discontinued] Sun Jun 01 2008, 22:05 | |
| I <3 that banner too =]]]
sry i read it late =[
but gr8 chappie as always
i m really excited to see how the d8 goes ... xD | |
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Number of posts : 2087 Age : 33 Location : INDIA Job/hobbies : MCR + TH LOVING Humor : sarcastic Registration date : 2008-04-21
| Subject: Re: I'll Die For You [Discontinued] Mon Jun 02 2008, 15:55 | |
| Kim's *POV*
Riding alone with Tom to the bowling alley was highly nerve racking, because I was a hyper kid. With others around my hyper activity was usually hidden, but being alone with some one showed my true colors. With difficulty I kept my mouth shut, fiddling with the rings on my finger, which Alex had so kindly lend me.
Sensing my tension Tom started talking “so do you like bowling?”
“Are you kidding me, I haven’t touched it in my life!”
“Oh well that’s a relief, I thought id have to pretend that I was good at it” he chuckled “Then why are we going there if we haven’t ever tried it?”
“Then where do you suggest we should go?”
“Go – Carting”
“Go Carting, I’ve never done go carting either”
“I could teach you, don’t worry about that. It’s simpler than bowling anyway”
I was a little uneasy about going for go carting and make a fool out of myself in front of him, but I couldn’t refuse to him either. I mean who could contradict anything that came out of that lick worthy mouth of his.
So we reached the place after a good half an hour ride and something just dawned on me.
“Don’t you need to book this place or something?”
“Oh don’t worry about that, I am a frequent visitor, and don’t keep any hopes of winning.”
He made me giggle when he said that looking a bit too cute for my own good. We were shown to our carts and I was instructed on how to use it, while Tom readied himself for the race. I frankly didn’t think he needed to ready himself, because I was going to suck at it.
“It’s an 8 lap race and whoever wins - wins” the staff said, waving the flag
Tom shot off immediately, when I hadn’t even touched the steering, and when I completed one lap, he was on his 3rd. I completed my 8 laps at snail pace as compared to Tom's, who was already done a long time before me. I got out of the cart to be greeted by a really cheeky grin on Tom's face.
“I told you so, I’d win”
“Hey no fair; you’re a pro at it”
“So, but you did a good job”
He put his arm around my waist and walked towards the car singing happily, making me laugh even more nervously. We went to a diner after that, because we were positively starving and order two burgers and French fries.
During our meal, Tom suddenly got up and came and sat besides me. I don’t know why he did that, but he did it. He kept the mood light with his silly jokes that made me laugh so much. All of a sudden I found myself sitting much closer to him, than earlier. I looked up at him, searching for a pigment of love in his miraculously beautiful eyes. He touched my cheek so softly, giving me butterflies. I tried to keep my beat regulated, because at that very moment I was highly convinced that my heart would just stop. He kept on looking at me.
Either kiss me or just stop gazing at me, please Tom. I chanted inside my head. Just staring at him was excruciating. Finally and thankfully he moved his head closer and his lips touched mine. It was a different feeling for me, a satisfaction I had never felt before. Knowing that the guy I liked was sitting next to me and kissing me, was liberating. I just wanted to keep it that way.
Bill's *POV*
It had been two hours since Tom had left and he hadn’t called yet. I was quiet truthfully relieved, because I really wanted it to work out between them. Kim was a nice bubbly cheerful girl who hopefully could put an end to my brother’s playboy sprees.
The phone rang suddenly, scaring me. Alex spoke from the other end. I felt that same tightness inside my guts again, like someone was pulling them out.
“Hey Alex”
“Sorry I was just getting bored, so I thought I might use my time and talk to you.”
“I was getting bored myself; the laptop’s not working and I have nothing else to do”
“How do you think its going between those two?”
“Well Tom hasn’t called me yet, so I presume its going pretty well.”
“Yeah” she laughed and suddenly went silent. There was a knock at my door, and I asked her to hold.
“Tom!”
“Why are you so shocked to see me?”
“No I wasn’t expecting you so early”
“So early? We took 2 and a half hours idiot, that’s long enough for a first date”
“Oh wait hang on, Alex is on phone, I’ll say bye to her.” “Yeah and also tell her that I will stay one piece no matter what” Tom yelled from his room while I walked back to the phone. I didn’t know what he was talking about but I conveyed his message anyway.
She giggled and said bye because Kim was waiting to talk to her on the other line. I hung up and went to my room. Tom walked in seconds later, looking at me accusatorily.
“What?” I innocently asked
“You are so useless Bill.”
“Huh, what – why – why me – why am I useless?”
“Well I thought you’d be dying to know how my date was and instead you come and sit here in your room day dreaming – no night dreaming about Alex.” He accused me “Haw how was I to know you wanted to tell me. You generally don’t share such – ahem – information with me”
“Well then today I want to”
“Well then start barking” I said and doubled up laughing. Tom looked at me and winked tackling me on my bed. It was funny how even at 18 years of age he wished to confide all the ‘dirty’ details of his date in me. I suppose that came with the part and parcel of being twins and I have to admit, there wasn’t another person whom I trusted more than Tom.
“You gave her a good night kiss – in front of her mother?”
“Hey I was about to go without giving her the kiss, because frankly I didn’t want to do that in front of her mother, but her mother was the one who stopped me and said aren’t you even going to give my daughter a good night kiss! It was odd and funny and weirdly cool, because now I know that if something happens with Kim then her mother won’t eat me”
“Yeah Alex will”
“Damn I forgot about her. Hopefully by then she’d fully approve of me”
“I don’t think she hates you even now, she’s just making sure Kim stays happy.”
“Oh you are so in love with Alex – you’re taking her side”
“No I am not!” I defended myself
But I knew that was a very unconvincing defense and Tom was going to catch it immediately. I had fallen in love with her the moment she had fixed those entrancing dark brown eyes on me.
“Its okay Bill, you’ll get her in time” Tom comforted and went to his own room. I just hoped for that to come true soon. | |
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