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PostSubject: Re: Reality is a dream   Reality is a dream - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeSat Aug 23 2008, 16:58

^^nice chap sav!!

gustav: sleeping. (how cute!!)

mehr mehr mehr.................
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PostSubject: Re: Reality is a dream   Reality is a dream - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeSun Aug 24 2008, 11:24

this chapter was very funny though not so long but still nice
but as Pav said the best was the thong/smack part.
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PostSubject: Re: Reality is a dream   Reality is a dream - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeMon Aug 25 2008, 23:04

OK Guys!!!!!! the next chap is here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...... dedicated to Chloe, Kim, Val and Tye [for the help last night]
ahem... also dedicated to Kirsty... cause she kept hassling me xD

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A couple of days had gone by and still, we were bored fucking shitless!

“Psssssssssst!” Tom said in my ear causing me to jerk backwards and bash my head on the wall,

“Fuck tom what?!” I said while massaging my head.

“Let’s go on…. YOUTUBE!!!!” with that he ran off to the computer waiting for me.

I moaned and got up hesitantly before moving my ass over to the computer

Couple of minutes later....

“OH MY GODDDD!!!!!!!!!!!” Tom said pointing to a title which said “do you want to fuck, Tom?” oooo

“Haha click on it Tom!” I had already seen this video, like I have the rest…..

We heard the song and as I was unfazed by it, Tom, however, was glued to the screen.

Once the song was finished, everything went silent…..

In minutes I heard cracks of laughter coming from more than one person- Bill and Chloe seemed to have joined us…

“OH MY GOD THAT WAS SO WEIRD!!!” Tom said during little fits of laughter, which sounded like booms of thunder!

It seemed decades before everyone was able to stop laughing,

“Ah I’m going up coming?” Bill asked Chloe,

“Ja nothing better to do” after she said that she was welcomed by a bunch of whistles going on, courtesy of me and Tom XD.

They ignored us and went to their room…….to do stuff most probably XD



CHLOE POV

Once we got to the room (hearing Tom and Sav Hooting at us) I plopped down on the bed before turning to Bill who was smiling suggestively… I was about to ask him why he was smiling like that but soon realized… Due to the You Tube Video, it had made him Horny! Great!

“You wanna fuck” it wasn’t a question…

“JA” with that he smashed his lips hard against mine… and something went from there, then to there and ended up back here..,.



MY POV

Tom and I were lazily walking around the Living room. Before we decided to go upstairs and (try) to sleep,


Yes not going to happen with the Racket coming from the other room…..Chloe and Bill’s to be exact…

“Oh great!!!!!!!!! Tom lets go out! I don’t want to hear them coming!!!!” I whined,

“JA your right, we heard enough of that ha-ha”

And off we went, leaving moans coming from the other room….

2 WEEKS LATER PEOPLE!

We had to go to Switzerland as we had 3 shows in some of the cities,

Tom and I finally decided we would NOT get the room next to Bill and Chloe’s…..too disturbing; we’ll leave Georg to masturbate off of their noises!

We were all waiting in one Tom's room from the concert hall, and for once, we were all BORED,

“I KNOW!” Georg screamed, making all of us jump.

“What?!” Gustav said quietly,

“Lets play hide and seek!” yup Georg is 3 years old!

“OK, but I am not counting!” I said followed by Tom, Gustav, Bill and Chloe,

“Oh why me?!” Georg whined,

“’Cause you’re the most stupid!” I screamed.

“Fine, 1….2….3…” this carried on while we all split up and ran to hide.

Chloe’s POV…

I snuck off with Bill and we both ended up in Tom's tiny cramped closet, believe it or not, we both fit in it…

“It’s hot in here!” I heard Bill whine,

“Yeh no shit Sherlock!” I said surprisingly

“Ugh too hot- SHIT SHHHHHH!” before he could finish we heard Georg’s intimidating voice boom…


MY POV…

Tom and I ended up running around in circles; yes I literally mean circles….

“Oh no…” Tom said and pulled me into a dark corner, him being in front of me.

1. I cant see,
2. Tom smells good,
3. His breathe is hitting my lips flirtatiously….

“What is it?” I asked trying hard not to kiss him passionately…

“other than the fact that I’m horny, Georg’s here….” Greeaaat 2 problems, I can help with one but not the other Wink

“Tom, get caught and say your going to the bathroom, I’ll meet you there” I winked then pushed him put of the dark corner.

“Wha- TOM I FOUND YOU!” Georg bounded down the hallway, And Tom looked petrified…


I jumped out mere moments after Tom said he was going to the bathroom, I scared Georg so me is HAPPY HAPPY HAPPY….

“HAHAHHA I FOUND YOOU!!!!!” Georg screamed in my ear,

“yes good for you, I’m going to wait …. Somewhere.” I said then ran off

…..
Once I reached the bathroom, I eagerly pushed the door open and ran in, only to see Tom trying his hardest not to scream…

“Hah someone’s eager,” I said, then smashed my lips to his.

Then some things happened Wink

Chloe POV…

“Bill? What are you doing?” I asked Bill questioningly,

“Grinding against you, other than that, being freaking BOILING” he said the last part seductively in my ear.

“Ah… Bill? We can’t do that while we are supposed to be hiding!” I said trying VERY hard to not grind back.

“I locked the door” Oh so bill is clever XD

“Ugh fine.” I said than gave in…..

BACK TO MOI….

After our little “party” in the bathroom, Tom and I went to His Dressing room, where we still ended up making out- oh the fun never stops!

“GET A ROOM!” A booming voice echoed through my head which made me pull away from the luscious lips of Tom.

“Ugh this is MY ROOM” Tom replied obviously angry that our session was over,

“SO?!” The booming voice, also known as Georg said,

“It means idiot. GET. OUT. NOW.” Tom replied angrily,

“Ugh fine, just don’t get all diva on me” He said in a gayish voice.

“Bye.” Tom replied then continued kissing me

“BOO!” WHAT NOW?!

“UGH” Tom had enough, he got off me and surprisingly it was Chloe who had screamed boo in his ear. Mmhm….. Something must have gone on between them too, Chloe’s lips are swollen and Bill’s top is the wrong way round….

“Someone got laid today!” Chloe and I said together…

“Hah we both got laid today!” I said and Chloe laughed along before being pushed out of the room by bill, who said that they had to find Gustav.

“Ugh, Sav!” He said than started kissing me non stop, I barely had time to BREATHE!

Well, today was fun, but I am soooo tired! Unbelievable!

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PostSubject: Re: Reality is a dream   Reality is a dream - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeMon Aug 25 2008, 23:35

Yay sav, new chapter in which all I seemed to do was have sex.....poor Bill, I don't half wear him out!! i bet everyone now thinks I'm a real whore xD
Again, another chapter inspired by our crazy convos late at night!!!
Great as usuall...more!
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PostSubject: Re: Reality is a dream   Reality is a dream - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeTue Aug 26 2008, 00:26

ohh man pity i dont read fan fics XD
i read all ur topic in 1 hour my god its hilarious!
moreee!!!! i liked this one! XDDDDDDDDD
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PostSubject: Re: Reality is a dream   Reality is a dream - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeTue Aug 26 2008, 11:26

yay!! new chapter its hilarious.
hmm... interesting....
and hey i dont hassle you!!!
its just i like your story too much to stay without a chapter for long xD
anyway great and when you get inspired post more pwetty pwease
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PostSubject: Re: Reality is a dream   Reality is a dream - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeTue Aug 26 2008, 15:26

great work sav!!! i luv it!!!!!!!

next chap plssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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PostSubject: Re: Reality is a dream   Reality is a dream - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeTue Aug 26 2008, 19:38

HILLARIOOUS AS USAUAL!

but i would like to make one tiny critical comment...please dont put in SO much sex in the story because every chapter has it...esp Chloe and bill and then it gets repetitive and then one tends to lose interest...so just dont put in SO much sex and stuff.
it's a fun story and I LOVE IT!

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PostSubject: Re: Reality is a dream   Reality is a dream - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeWed Aug 27 2008, 15:59

Tom's .. Flying .. V wrote:
we’ll leave Georg to masturbate off of their noises!
LOFLMFAOROFL xD
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PostSubject: Re: Reality is a dream   Reality is a dream - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeMon Sep 15 2008, 21:26

OK.. sorry for the hold up (Pav) but i did not mean to... my computer deleted all tthe stuff i wrote.. so i had to get it off somewhere else!

ANYWAY. next chapter is for ya'll


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After Switzerland, where Chloe and I spent about €100 on Swiss chocolate…. Ja its really good, except the dark chocolate, I HATE dark chocolate…

Anyway,
We went to Norway for a couple of concerts and we would then move to the Nederland.

In Norway Bill decided he wanted Chloe and him to stay at a different hotel; it was for the better, they don’t stop! Poor Tom and I haven’t been able to sleep in ages!

So while Tom, The G’s and I stayed in the Hilton, Chloe and Bill got the Radisson.

YAY!!! Tom and I can get some sleep!!!

Chloe’s POV

So, Bill and I were staying in the penthouse of the Radisson… YAY!!!

“Bill?” I asked


“Thats Ma name don’t wear it out” how can I wear it out? 300000 girls scream it everyday!

“Ja um…Why did you get us a separate Hotel??” I was confused

“Oh, Ja because Tom and Sav always complain about us being…um…loud? Yes so I decided to pick a different hotel!” so we are doing something tonight!

“so…you brought me here for… alone time?” I said smirking at his cutness,

“Ugh YES!” frustrated Bill is CUTE Bill.

“Ok ok…” I said but decided to drop it and kissed him frantically

Yup you should know what happened then….

MY POV!! [I know you missed me xD]

Tom and I decided to go disturb our mental friends G and G, we all decided it was fair to play Guitar hero, all is exactly everyone but me!

I cant play an instrument to save my life! So I would end up making a fool of myself, THANK GOD CHLOE ISNT HERE!

“No Tom I can’t play!” I refused the 10th time to play,

“Come on Sav!” he smiled at me and almost made me give in but I didn’t,

“I promise to entertain you tonight!” he said flicking his tongue to play with his lip ring before looking at me pleadingly…. He looks like a lost puppy!

“Ugh Tom!!!! Your just going to make me make a fool of myself!” I whined closing my eyes in fear of my mind changing.

“I’ll help you! I’ll guide you along PLLEEEAASSSEE SAVI!!!!” damn it he got me, he used my nickname.

I groaned before going into my fate.

As soon as the guitar was on me, Tom was behind me, hands on my hands and nose on my neck.

“Ready?” he said as if it was a life crisis!

“As I’ll ever be!” I said and the music started playing.

3 minutes later the song finished and I was SHOCKED!

“HAHA I beat you Georg!” I said still in the same place.

“Ja im going to… the other bathroom, Gustav seems to have gone to the other one” he said than went without waiting for a reply.

Tom moved and sat back down on the sofa, I soon followed sitting in his lap.

“I told you you would be fine!” he said and nuzzled into my neck.

“Yeh I guess!” I sighed dramatically and heard a soft laugh from tom which oozed on my neck,

“Thank you” ok…? Why is he saying thank you?

“For what?” I asked

“Showing me what it feels like to love” he said and kissed me passionately. When I pulled back I smiled at him,

“I love you”

“love you too” and I continued to kiss him until I heard Gustav scream Chloe was here which sent me into panic over drive

“Fuck you gustav!” I said when I realized Chloe wasn’t here, I still smirked though

“GUSTAV!” Tom got annoyed quick, must be my kissing XP

“Tom lets go back to our room now, I’m tired…” Bleh…Tom tired me out.

“Fine see ya guys!” he said than ran out of the room.

Once we got into our room I almost fell asleep on the floor… yet knowing that could hurt in the morning. When we were supposed to be going to the Nederland…made me decide that I didn’t want to have that happen to me.

I heard Tom plonk down on the bed before putting his arm around me and drifting off to sleep.

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We were about to board the plane for the Nederland when I fell asleep, when I woke up, I was on my chair with my head on tom’s shoulder… and Chloe and bill staring at us before whispering muttered words of “aww” “how cute” “they are perfect for each other”. I merely fingered them off and buried my head in the crook of Tom’s neck, which made him put a hand over my waist with his lips lingering on my hair.

The plane ride went by quickly, knowing I was asleep.

1 DAY LATER.

Chloe and I were wondering about by the stage TH were using tonight, talking about absolutely nothing, we heard Fans entering and quickly scrambled to the safety of the stage. Where they couldn’t go.

But what we didn’t expect was seeing those two tonight…

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cliff Hanger xD

the next chapter is... ugh... VERY GOOD!!

Now a commenter gets icecream....yes chloe.. it can be on bill *rolls eyes playfully*
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PostSubject: Re: Reality is a dream   Reality is a dream - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeMon Sep 15 2008, 21:42

hell no!!!!!
why did you have to stop in that fucking point?????
SAV YOURE SO MEAN
now that i commented can i have my ice cream??
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PostSubject: Re: Reality is a dream   Reality is a dream - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeMon Sep 15 2008, 21:46

Nice chapter, lofl me and Bill in a separate hotel, oh yeah what a night xD The next chapter is.......makes me go grr but its great at the same time. So bring on the rest.

Now I've commented give me my Bill....with the ice cream of course! xD
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PostSubject: Re: Reality is a dream   Reality is a dream - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeMon Sep 15 2008, 23:10

omg sav!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

but u r so mean to stop at that point............................................xD

free hugs free hugs MEHR!!!!! MEHR!!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Reality is a dream   Reality is a dream - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeTue Sep 16 2008, 20:11

what...POST MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I WANT IT!
MORE MORE MORE SAV!
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PostSubject: Re: Reality is a dream   Reality is a dream - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeTue Sep 16 2008, 20:14

DUM DUM DUM DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUM!!!!!!!! xD

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“CHLOE?!” Meagan and Amanda… ugh I hate those sluts! Screamed in unison.

“Like what are you doing here?” Meagan said in that irritating accent of hers,

“Ugh well if you had watched TH TV or anything like that you would know, That we are here with Bill and Tom.” Chloe said matter-of-factly,

“Yes Hun that’s nice” Meagan said turning to me, “Why are you really here?”

“What Chloe said” I answered as if I was the proudest person on earth.

“How?” I gave Chloë a “is she that unbelievably dense” look which she nodded to.

“Cause we met them, and fell in love with them. Do you need me to spell it out for you?” I said bitterly

“Ugh no, but that is because they aren’t in love with you” Amanda spoke up next… oooo how I’d love to grab her and rip her head off!

“Oh and how do you know that?” I said stepping forward

“Because both me and Meagan know that They had come to the Avalon to see us. And that Tom wants to Grab me and be mine, and Bill wants to grab Meagan and love her” she said all cheery, I hate cheery.

“Bitch! Tom and I are Together, and Bill and Chloe are together. If you can’t get that in your head than you need to call an ambulance!!! Something is wrong with your brain!” I said standing so close I had to squint to see properly.

Chloe started bickering at Meagan while Amanda and I were bickering; it was then that I heard those fowl words leave Meagan’s mouth.

“You’re just a slutty bitch that wants to fuck Bill and leave him, with the money to go!” ARGH

“BITCH! CHLOE DOESN’T WANT TO LEAVE BILL EVER IN A MILLION YEARS! SHE LOVES HIM SO MUCH ITS UNBERABLE, SHE SPENDS EVERY MINUTE WITH HIM AND HE LOVES IT! SO FUCK OFF AND FUCK SOME OTHER GUY BECAUSE EVERYONE HATES YOU MEAGAN! NO ONE LIKES YOU EXCEPT YOUR SLUGGISH FRIEND WHO I’D BE HAPPY TO THROW OFF A 1000 STORY BUILDING!” I had to stop and breathe, when I noticed Tom behind me and Chloe buried deep into Bill’s shoulder.

“Well Hun I’m sorry to say this I am the only Mrs. Tom Kaulitz and no matter what I will be with him, we are made for each other… so go spread your legs for some other rock star as this one’s mine!” now words don’t hurt me, but they really turn my words colorful!

I laughed sarcastically, “Do you really think I am that stupid? You fucking slut! I don’t “spread my legs” for anyone! Neither does Chloe! We aren’t sluts unlike you! We don’t go around saying who should go to this fucking person and who should go to that! If we did do though, we’d put you and Meagan together; Imagine the anger between you two! So don’t you dare diss me or anyone I know and love because we are worth something! So even you Meagan go fuck off and date some egotistical bastard like yourself as we don’t need your shit here!” I said, Saki and Tobi, Escorted- no wait dragged those bitches out and Told the other fans who stood there shocked that the concert will start a little late.

I, however, was glued to the spot, and Tom had to tell me there gone before I could use my legs and go backstage. Immediately as I went into the room, I saw Chloe Crying against Bill and immediately turned into big sister mode, even though she is older.

I grabbed her and hugged her tightly and she hugged back with much force.

“Hun stop crying, your tears aren’t worth them, not now not ever!” I kept whispering words to her until she calmed down. Bill and Tom must have gone on stage while we were busy.

“Tha-Thanks for what you did” Chloe said weekly,

“It’s alright, I had to say that to those devious stupid sluts… your much better than they are I promise!” I said

she lifted her head up, “you rule” I laughed softly and brought her on the couch. Laying next to her to make her comfy.

Sometime later I felt Bill take Chloe away and I opened my eyes to see a sweaty gorgeous Tom,

“Tom..” I groaned and grabbed him so that I could stand up right.

“It’s ok I’m right here” he whispered softly leading me out.

Once we got to the Hotel (after bidding Chloe and Bill goodnight) I changed half asleep and went to Tom who was in bed already,

“Tom...” I said smiling a little as he turned to face me,

“I meant what I said, I won’t leave you for the world” I kissed his forehead,

I won’t let you go, I love you too much. You’re my life and I wouldn’t have it any other way” He kissed me passionately before pulling me as close as he could to me and drifting off into dream world with me.

BILLPOV!!!


When I took Chloe back to the Hotel she was a mess! Poor girl, I would’ve loved to tear that Meagan bitch apart! But Chloe was to Upset to not get cradled, THANK GOD Sav was there to scream at her…

“Shh.. Chloe your safe I wont let her hurt you” I cradled her in bed comfortively.

“I love you” she said, I merely smiled and said it back

she fell asleep that night in peace, though with an etch of sadness.





TOM’S POV



When I woke up the first thing I saw was Sav’s beautiful face, as the curtains were shut with only a sliver of light coming through, It illuminated half of her face and made her look flawless, you would think she didn’t hold emotion if it weren’t for the huge etch of worry on her face.

I kissed her quickly before settling down and watching her breathes, amazed by the beauty.

She groaned and I guessed she was waking up though I didn’t move.

She opened her eyes slowly and smiled when she saw me.

“How long have you been staring?” she asked tiredly

“About half an hour” I said pulling back a lock of her hair from her face.

Her eyes suddenly bulged open and I was frightened for a second, “Chloe, how is Chloe!” she said and jumped up.

“Don’t worry, she is safe with Bill we will see her later anyway” I said and she fell back and snuggled up to me, I enjoyed her cutness.

“Ok…” she said drifting off to sleep, I followed soon after.

Poor Chloe, And Poor Sav.

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All i can say for the next chapter...

is that it actually made Chloe cry!

chocolate for whoever comments !!!! (pav) xD
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awwwwwwwwww............................

Sav....poor Chloe...oh i will so kill those two maggots! Get me in and i will tell them their real place...Whores!

MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!

(now do i get a chocolate covered Strify?)
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PostSubject: Re: Reality is a dream   Reality is a dream - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeTue Sep 16 2008, 20:32

aww
what a cute chapter i mean it was a little bit odd but in the end it was so cute how Bill and especially Tom reacted
I loved it Sav
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MORE and lets see if it will make me too cry as im a lil bit emotional....
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PostSubject: Re: Reality is a dream   Reality is a dream - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeTue Sep 16 2008, 23:42

Yay sav you posted xD
The next chapter still brings tears to my eyes. Not cos its sad but because its so sweet, the words and all.
So post more.....

Now where is that chocolate....oh biiiiiill!
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PostSubject: Re: Reality is a dream   Reality is a dream - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeWed Sep 17 2008, 21:51

tat was so sentimental and sweet i nearly cried Sad

waiting for next chap!! XD
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PostSubject: Re: Reality is a dream   Reality is a dream - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeWed Sep 17 2008, 21:56

omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!! how sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

poor chloe, feeling better???
u saved d day SuPeR sAv!!!!!!!!!

POST NEXT CHAP SOON.......PLS XxXxX
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PostSubject: Re: Reality is a dream   Reality is a dream - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeThu Sep 18 2008, 22:36

Ok guys... this chapter, well, you will hate me for how it ends... trust me

ahhhh. have fun reading! BTW i think it is kina short xD

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My Pov!!!

Later on… about 3 hours later, I had finally decided I was going to Chloe and Bill’s room where I could check on Chlo. I hope she is alright….if not. Meagen and Amanda should be sleeping with one eye open.

I knocked quietly on the door, where Bill answered.

“Sav?” He asked questioningly,

“Ja. I came to check up on Chloe… is she still asleep?” I wondered if she was,

“No… she is just getting over it I suppose… come on” he led the way to wear chloe was sitting on the couch hugging herself. She
looked depressed and agitated.

“chlooeee” I said then hugged her tightly,

“Sav, can’t. Breathe.” She barely said… me and my damn kill hugs!

“Sorry! Are you alright?” I guess she could tell, by the look on my face, that I didn’t mean the hug.

“Yeah. Bill helped a lot last night. And so did you… Thanks for screaming at them!” she said and smiled remembering that part.

“Ah. I have been wanting to do that for years! Amanda is a bitch… all that Tom shit about him being her one and only and
crap… almost made me cry, but I had to stay strong... knowing I don’t like to cry… especially in front of people. But Meagan, ARGH I would be so proud if I could rip her head off and throw it to a bunch of wild dogs…” she stopped me there, I realized I was about to tell my plans on how to kill her…

“Sav, I know. I wanted to do it since we had that fight, but every time I see her I get so intimidated! I mean, she is tall, pretty, skinny… and I am just some small plump girl! I mean why hasn’t Bill picked her?!?!?” her words shocked me,

“WHAT?!?! Chloe, she might be pretty. But Bill has someone who is BEAUTIFUL. She might be tall in height, but Bill has someone who is tall in EVERY SINGLE WAY. And plus, she might be tall, but I’m a freaking Giant! So I would stomp her if she even tried to intimidate you! Stop worrying. Bill loves you and everyone can see it! By the look in his eyes. The glow on his face. The way he smiles when you are around!!! EVERYTHING so stop worrying! I will put this in short. HE. LOVES. YOU. And YOU. LOVE. HIM. He doesn’t love Meagan. HE LOVES YOU” I said breathing again.

“It’s true. I do love you and I always will. Your wonderful but you don’t even know it! I am so glad I am with you because you see the real me! You are sacred to me and always will be! So don’t think your worthless ‘cause your not!” Bill entered the room saying that and cuddled chloe while I stayed on the coffee table.

“Now do you believe me?” I asked, years of me telling her she was going to get Bill had finally paid off.

“Thanks Sav. You rule!” she said then hugged me.

Bill hugged her again and I knew it was my cue to leave.

I was about to enter my room, when Bill came out and hugged me tightly.

“Thanks, for everything You have done for Chloe. I hate to think of all the times she has been depressed and I haven’t been there, holding her, soothing her, just BEING with her…” I noticed a tear drop right then and I hugged him again.

“Bill, all of those times.. they are in the past, just concentrate on looking after her now… I can tell you really love her. She needs that love” he smiled,

“thanks. I owe you” he said that and left.

I opened the room door expecting to see Tom asleep….

But what I didn’t expect…

Was seeing Tom lying there bleeding at his forehead… and a huge rock next to his face… with a broken glass window…

“TOM!!!!!” I screamed…

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sorry guys!!!

comment for someone covered in chocolate xD
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PostSubject: Re: Reality is a dream   Reality is a dream - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeThu Sep 18 2008, 22:42

FIRST COMMENT thereby I get Bill covered in chocolate.

The words Bill says still bring tears to my eyes cos they're so sweet!! Wish he'd really say that stuff to me!!
More. end of...just...MORE
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PostSubject: Re: Reality is a dream   Reality is a dream - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeThu Sep 18 2008, 22:51

ohhhh miene gottttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
^^i didnt except such an ending.......poor tom!!

i want mmmmmmeeeeeeeeeeehhhhhhhrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
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PostSubject: Re: Reality is a dream   Reality is a dream - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeFri Sep 19 2008, 10:53

wow this was very sweet and cute sav

but the ending.....i think it was......................
but im not sure so i better stay shut

so that i can confirm my doubts post MORE BITTE........
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PostSubject: Re: Reality is a dream   Reality is a dream - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeFri Sep 19 2008, 20:16

SAV!
but i think tom needs it for real...not in the story, i like him here for a change...but in reality, he needs a good stoning to bring him back to jnormalcy!

AMAZING CHAPPIE....
technically u owe me a chocolate colored Strify already!
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