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PostSubject: Re: Strawberries [PART 19]   Strawberries [PART 19] - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeWed Jul 02 2008, 16:44

i just read the last chapter. its soo amazing. i luv it.
more when you can pls...
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PostSubject: Re: Strawberries [PART 19]   Strawberries [PART 19] - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeThu Jul 03 2008, 11:11

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.... I like....
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PostSubject: Re: Strawberries [PART 19]   Strawberries [PART 19] - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeThu Jul 03 2008, 22:14

omg i m just clapping right now hahahhahahahha xD

Ahhh that made me so happy xD ihih

more when you can bitte =]]
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PostSubject: Re: Strawberries [PART 19]   Strawberries [PART 19] - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeMon Jul 07 2008, 14:45

chloe!! come on!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
post more already!!
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PostSubject: Re: Strawberries [PART 19]   Strawberries [PART 19] - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeWed Jul 23 2008, 11:54

chloe.. Smile ....


are you going to make me...


BEG??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Strawberries [PART 19]   Strawberries [PART 19] - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeWed Jul 23 2008, 17:53

PLEASE CHLOE, MORE!!! DO IT FOR YOUR INSANE FRIEND!!!!! XD
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PostSubject: Re: Strawberries [PART 19]   Strawberries [PART 19] - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeThu Jul 24 2008, 12:54

lol chloe is having trouble writing the next chapter as she does not have the spark that she used to have
in this story....

HAVE NO FEAR!!!!!

she has half a chapter written

and she says she will probably finish it tonight ok?

oh and BTW i am eating a strawberry!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Strawberries [PART 19]   Strawberries [PART 19] - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeThu Jul 24 2008, 16:58

I just read all the chapters, and i love it! You are a great writer xD

More bitte! (:
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PostSubject: Re: Strawberries [PART 19]   Strawberries [PART 19] - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeWed Jul 30 2008, 19:09

Don't kill your insane friend!!!!!!!!!...post the next chappie!!!!!!! worship
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PostSubject: Re: Strawberries [PART 19]   Strawberries [PART 19] - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeWed Jul 30 2008, 20:47

FINALLY!!!! Chapter 10. Sorry for the loooooooooooong wait, I'd just lost inspiration but I'm pretty sure it's back now! ANyway, enjoy guys!!! And thanks for all the comments.

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The next day, Raine bubbled with excitement as she entered the school building. Today was the first day she’d be entering school as Bill’s girlfriend; she wondered if things would be different.

She hurried towards the school and tried to act normal, walking over to her locker to pull out the books she would need for the day.

“Boo!” a voice called out from behind, startling her slightly.

She turned and grinned as her eyes landed upon Bill. “Hi.”

“Oh, we went for the strawberry look today, did we?” he asked as her cheeks flushed crimson. She slapped him playfully on the arm; so things would be normal after all. “So, um…class?”

“Yeah,” Raine nodded. She grinned at him before following him to their chemistry class. Sat in the back, with Tye and Tom, the four giggled and joked together like old friends as the teacher droned on about molecular bonds.

“Um…Raine,” Bill asked, halfway through. “Do you…want to go out, this Saturday?”

Raine bit her lip to prevent herself from squealing. “Sure, where to?”

“There’s this club, near my house, it’s really nice,” he said quietly. “Maybe you’d like to go to it with me?”

“Sure!” she replied. “Just tell me where and what time and I’ll be there.”

“Well, I was thinking, you could come over to my house before, and we could hang out,” Bill continued.

“Sure,” Raine replied. She couldn’t think of a better way to spend a Saturday.

“Ok, meet me at my house at 4?” he said. “This is the address.”

She eagerly took his home address and stashed it away in her pocket. She had a date with Bill; she was so happy! The day disappeared in a flash after that as Rain walked around in a daze. In fact, that daze continued until Friday afternoon loomed and she remembered, Tye had a tutoring session with Tom.

“Ok so, you have everything?” she asked, as her and Tye were in the bathrooms, helping Tye get ready.

“Guitar, English books, yup,” Tye nodded.

“Ok and did you bring anything to change into?” Raine asked, glancing at Tye’s usual black t-shirt and jeans.

“No, why would I?” she asked, raising an eyebrow.

“Duh!” Raine sighed, rolling her eyes. “To get Tom’s attention! Good job I brought something.”

Tye looked on skeptically as Raine pulled a red low cut, v-neck sweater out of her bag which looked two sizes too small. “Hey! I thought I lost that!”

“No, you just left it at my house last time we went clubbing,” Raine replied, rolling her eyes. “Quick, put it on!”

Tye obliged, pulling off her black t-shirt and replacing it with the slinky red number. “There we go!” Raine squealed. “Hot!”

“Thanks,” Tye responded.

“Make up!”

“I’m wearing make up!” Tye sighed.

“No, you need more,” Raine replied. “Mascara, nice long eyelashes. And eyeliner, not too much, just enough to darken your eyes.”

Tye obliged once more, touching up her already thick make up. Once done, Raine pulled out a bottle of perfume and spritzed her with it generously. Tye coughed as the scent overpowered her, but she had to admit it was a gorgeous smell.

“Ok, I think you’re ready,” Raine said. “Now listen to me, if you don’t get with him today, I’m shooting you.”

“so violent, Raine!” Tye grinned. “I’m not ‘getting’ with him anyway, you know I’m not like that.”

“You’re such a perv at times!” Raine replied. “I didn’t mean like that, I meant like, being with him!”

“’Scuse me for thinking the whore of Babylon meant sex,” Tye replied, winking at Raine; she didn’t really mean the things she was saying.

“It’s ok, at least I’m not the eternal virgin!” Raine responded, grinning at her. It was a regular joke between the two ever since Raine’s fourteenth birthday when she’d done more than planned with her next door neighbor. “Now let’s go and get you your man!”

Raine and Tye exited the bathroom, heading out into the courtyard where Bill and Tom were waiting.

“Hey guys!” Raine called, walking over to them. “So, I better be off.”

“Do you want me to give you a lift somewhere, Raine?” Tom asked.

“Um…” she was debating whether to say yes or not. She didn’t really want to get the bus but she did live quite out of the way.

“Come on,” Bill replied, grinning at her. “Come with us, he can drop you off at home.”

“Bill wants to know where you live,” Tom cut in, grinning at us both. “That way he can stalk you and watch you in the night. It’s how he gets his kicks.”

Bill rolled his eyes. “Ignore him, come on.”

They led the two over to a huge black Escalade parked beside the front gates. “Holy fuck, this is your car? How the fuck did you afford that?”

“It was a present,” Tom replied. “My dad got it for me, trying to bribe me.”

“Did it work?!” Raine exclaimed.

“Almost,” Tom said. The group climbed up into the giant car and sped out of the carpark. Almost immediately, they were pulling into Raine’s street.

“this is me,” she said as they pulled up outside a small house. “I’ll see you tomorrow, Bill. Thanks for the ride Tom!”

She hopped out and waved goodbye before scampering into her house to wait for Tye to get home and give her all the gory details.

When they reached the Kaulitz residence, Bill scampered out of the car, disappearing into the vacant house and up to his room, barricading himself inside in order to get online and talk to Raine.

“He’s eager,” Tye said, watching the metaphorical trail of dust he’d left behind.

“He is!” Tom agreed. “Come on, let’s get this English shit over with.”

Tye nodded and followed Tom into the house. After playing good host for a few moments, he led her up to his room and settled upon his bed with his English book, waiting for her to sit beside him. She nervously settled down beside him, conscious of how close he was to her and the fact that they were on his bed.

She began to go over where he was lacking, helping him with the language. She helped him with his homework and the extra assignment he’d been given. The day wore on slowly and, after an hour and a half, they were done with English.

“Finally,” Tom groaned, throwing his book across the room in the general direction of his desk.

“It wasn’t that bad,” Tye rolled her eyes. “You had me here to make it better!”

“I guess that’s true,” he replied, smiling flirtatiously. Since she’d arrived, he’d been in full flirt mode. He liked this girl, she was pretty and she was already in his bed; this should be easy. He leant back and spread out across the bed, stretching his muscles. “Do you want to come up here with me?”

Tye shrugged and snaked up the bed, sitting beside Tom with her back up against the headboard.

“Do you wanna do the guitar thing now?” she asked nervously.

“Sure, can do,” Tom replied. He leant over Tye, his body stretching cat like as he grasped his Gibson guitar. Her breath caught in her throat as he stretched luxuriously across her. She leaped up off the bed once his guitar was securely in hand and went over to the door to grab her own. Unlike Tom, she didn’t own a Gibson but it was a pretty good knock off.

“Show me what you know,” Tom said, his voice low as he caressed his beloved Gibson.

Tye nodded before gently strumming the guitar, playing a few chords and notes before picking up a rhythm. A few moments into the rhythm and her fingers stumbled over the chords, causing a sour note to ring through the room.

“You’re not holding the strings tight enough,” Tom said, leaning forward and molding himself around her, his hands upon her own. He pressed her fingers down against the strings whilst leaning over her shoulder. “See, feel the difference in pressure? You really need to hold the strings this tight, otherwise your fingers will slip and it’ll vibrate. Pick up the rhythm again.”

Tye did as she was told, Tom’s hand still guiding her own over the strings. It was easier to play the rhythm now that she had the added pressure of Tom’s fingers.

“You’re pretty good, you know,” Tom whispered into her ear, his breath ruffling her hair and causing her to shiver.

“Thanks,” she replied, heart racing. She was barely concentrating on the guitar now; all she could think about was Tom. His fingers slackened against hers and she followed suit, all concentration lost.

“Perhaps you don’t need me after all,” Tom said quietly; his face so close to her his lips grazed the skin of her neck gently.

“Well then, why don’t you show me how well you can play,” she replied demurely.

He chuckled before pulling away and grasping his guitar once more, picking up a rhythm and playing it confidently. Tye was transfixed as he played. His fingers deftly danced across the strings, eliciting the most beautiful rhythm ever from them. By the time he’d finished, she was hypnotized.

“That was beautiful,” she sighed.

“Thanks, it’s something me and Bill are working on,” he replied, grinning at her, his tongue flicking out to dance with his lip ring seductively.

“W-what do you mean, you and Bill are working on?” she asked, trying not to focus on his lip ring.

“We have a band,” Tom replied. “Bill sings, I play guitar and we have Georg and Gustav, remember them?”

“Yeah.”

“You should come hear us rehearse some time,” Tom said, smirking seductively. “You might see something you like.”

“Perhaps I already have,” she replied on a whim.

Tom grinned, chuckling slightly. “Well why don’t you come get it?”

“I’m not the kind of girl to make the first move,” she replied.

Tom got the hint, leaning forward and capturing her mouth in a kiss. She gladly fell into the embrace, becoming lost within his kiss. The world fell away and her brain seemed to die, all she felt was Tom’s lips on her own. She barely felt him push her back against the bed, barely felt his hands deftly begin to remove her clothes. She didn’t want this, not now, not like this, but she was too lost to say no. By the time the deed was done, she was only just coming back to the realm of the living, her mind still lost in the fact that Tom had kissed her.

Only then did it occur to her that he hadn’t just kissed her; he’d done something no-one else had ever done with her. She hurriedly pulled on her clothes and gathered her stuff.

“Do you want me to take you home?” Tom asked, as he lazily pulled his own clothes on.

“Please,” she replied quietly. He nodded and they left the house, climbing into his car and heading into Berlin to take Tye home.

She willed herself not to cry on the ride there. When they reached her house, she thanked Tom and climbed out, slowly walking into her home. The moment she shut the door behind her, she sunk to the ground, crying. She’d wanted to be different. She’d wanted to be the one girl who hadn’t just slept with Tom, she didn’t want to be just another one of his one-night stands. She told herself she’d be the one for him, the one to change his ways.

Not that it matter now; she turned out to be just like them.
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PostSubject: Re: Strawberries [PART 19]   Strawberries [PART 19] - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeWed Jul 30 2008, 21:17

owww...ok i love Tom but please please please....
REMEMBER TO TELL ME TO KILL HIM

but i also feel sorry for Tom cause he didnt know
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PostSubject: Re: Strawberries [PART 19]   Strawberries [PART 19] - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeWed Jul 30 2008, 22:05

Yayy i love it!

i love it when bill calls her his little strawberry hehe its cuteeee. Strawberries [PART 19] - Page 3 Icon_razz

But naughty tomi Mad

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Bad Tommi!!! i love this story dammit!
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PostSubject: Re: Strawberries [PART 19]   Strawberries [PART 19] - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeThu Jul 31 2008, 12:23

The strawberry part...its so cute when Bill calls Raine strawberry.
Tom and Tye had a nice beginning but a how can I call it?? stupid ending??
I thought Tom was gonna be kind of slow with Tye
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Yea i agree with Kirsty... i thought the same xD

Poor Tye... =[ *i hope Bill will kick Tomii just like in In Die Nacht*

more when you can bitte =]
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Toooooooooooooooooooooom!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pale You shall die!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You are a very bad boy!!!! Mad
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Luanagk wrote:
Yea i agree with Kirsty... i thought the same xD

Poor Tye... =[ *i hope Bill will kick Tomii just like in In Die Nacht*

more when you can bitte =]
looooooooooooool i hope he will not kick him like that only cos thats only a playful slap i hope he kicks him really hard in his ass that he wont be able to sit Strawberries [PART 19] - Page 3 Icon_razz
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great story thumbup . i luv it a lot!!! poor tye, im very sorry for her.
cant wait for mehr Wink .....pls
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Just when i was starting to like Tom is Scarlet temptations...you came up with THIS!
Chloe how could you!
...man now i am back in my tom hater mode!...
but...awesome chapter none the less.Post more soon!
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Ok nobody pass out from shock!! yes!!! It's an update!! sorry they're not so frequent, I'm being hassled, I MEAN motivated into writing other stories -.- but here you go!! New chapter full of fluff and happiness (for now). Thanks for the comments guys and please let me know what you thought of this one!!!

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The room was a mess. Clothes were strewn haphazardly all around the place and everything seemed to be in disarray. Under a pile of clothes was Raine, frantically searching for her phone. Finding the device was a triumph for her and she pulled the slim, black decide out of the pile it was hidden in, flinging it open and dialing a familiar number.

Three rings later and somebody answered.

“hello?”

“Tye!” Raine exclaimed as she made her way over to her bed…well, it looked like her bed under the clothes. “Why didn’t you call me when you got home last night?”

“Oh uh…I was kinda tired you see,” Tye replied, rubbing at her sore, swollen eyes.

“How come?” Raine asked as she dug through another pile of clothes, looking for something to wear.

“Oh you know, helping Tom was a hassle and all,” Tye said.

“Did anything happen between you two?” Raine asked suggestively.

“We kissed,” Tye said, ready to launch into the story of how things happened. She could use Raine right now to comfort her; she felt like such a whore and she knew her best friend was the one she needed to turn to.

“You did?!” Raine exclaimed, standing up off the bed, as she did so, she fell over a boot. “Ow, fuck!”

“What? What’s wrong?” Tye asked, slightly worried.

“I fell over some shoes,” Raine rolled her eyes at herself. “My room’s a fucking mess.”

“Why?” Tye asked, confused.

“I’m trying to find something to wear for my date tonight,” Raine replied as she picked herself up off the floor.

“Oh yeah, I forgot about that!” Tye exclaimed. She decided perhaps her tales from last night could wait. “Are you nervous?”

“Hell yeah!” Raine replied. “I have no idea what to wear and I’ve got to meet him in two hours! But go on, more about last night.”

“Not much happened,” Tye lied. She really didn’t think Raine needed to hear anything right now, she didn’t want to spoil her date. “We did English, played guitar, talked, kissed a bit and then he drove me home.”

“So are you two dating?” Raine pressed.

“No, I don’t think so,” Tye replied. “We’re just, seeing how things go.”

“Probably smart to do like that, makes it more casual, less stress and stuff,” Raine said. “Well school on Monday should be interesting.”

“Considering all the girls will be jealous of you because you bagged Bill, for sure!” Tye replied. “Do you know how hard every girl in our form has tried to get him? And he always turns them down. I have to admit, you done good!”

“Thanks. Let’s just hope that doesn’t mean he’s really picky,” Raine replied. “Ok tell me, jeans or skirt? We’re going clubbing, mind.”

“Hmm…which skirt?”

“Black denim mini with the chains on it,” Raine replied.

“And what top were you thinking?” Tye asked.

“Black halter neck, the one that has a sort of corset style,” Raine replied. “The one we got from Camden.”

“Ah, miniskirt with that then,” Tye replied. “wear tights, it s well cold! Oh and those boots you have, you know, the stripper ones.”

“Come on!” Raine exclaimed. “They aren’t stripped boots!”

“After tonight they might be,” Tye joked, trying her hardest to make her voice sound light though she was still in deep pain over the Tom thing.

“Tye is everything ok?” Raine asked, her tone serious once more.

“Of course, why do you ask?” Tye replied, feigning innocence.

“You sound…different,” Raine said. “Like, something’s on your mind? Is something wrong?”

“no of course not,” Tye replied. “I must be just getting a hint of your nerves! I feel like I’m going on this date as well.”

“Are you sure?”

“100% sure!” Tye exclaimed. “I’m fine, I promise. Now, back to your dilemma.”

“Well my outfit’s sorted…now, make up and hair!” Raine exclaimed. The next hour was spent on the phone with Tye, discussing various options before finally Raine felt ready to leave. She grabbed her bag (filled with only the essentials of course!) and left to catch the bus.

She arrived outside Bill’s house at five to four. Taking a deep breath, she strolled up the path and knocked on the door.

She heard someone racing towards the door and something crashing to the floor, before the door swung open and stood before her was Bill, his hair a mess and his face make-up free for once.

“Hi,” he panted, having just raced to the door. “Come in.”

She entered the house as he closed the door behind her. “You ok, Bill?”

“sorry, I overslept,” Bill replied. “I was up late last night.”

“Yeah, he was thinking about you late into the night, right little brother?” Tom cut in. He stood in the doorway to what appeared to be the kitchen. “and you say women aren’t just for sex…not what I heard last night.”

Bill blushed the most beautiful shade of crimson before throwing his brother a dirty look. He grabbed Raine’s hand and dragged her out of the room and up the stairs.

“Behave up there!” Tom called out, causing Bill to curse back angrily. “sorry about him.”

“It’s alright,” Raine replied. “He doesn’t bother me.”

“He will eventually,” Bill sighed. “He can be a bit much.”

“So you were thinking about me last night, were you?” Raine asked as Bill slid his door shut. He blushed and ducked his head but the grin forming on his lips was enough confirmation for Raine. “It’s ok, I thought about you too.”

“You did?” Bill asked, grinning delightedly. He bounded over and sat on the bed, indicating she should follow. “You look really nice by the way.”

“Thanks, you look…different,” Raine said, at a loss for words.

“I look like shit, I need to do my hair, it’s a real mess,” Bill shrugged. “And I’m still in my pajamas.”

“Now I feel overdressed,” Raine grinned in response.

“You could take it off if you wanted,” Bill said. She nudged him fiercely before giggling. “Easy tiger. I don’t jump into bed with anyone on the first date.”

“Second then?” he asked, feigning hope.

“We’ll see,” she giggled back. “After all, I’m looking to date you, not be just a one night stand.”

“Oh trust me, I don’t do one night stands, especially not with girls like you,” Bill replied.

“What’s that supposed to mean?” Raine questioned.

“You’re addictive,” Bill replied matter-of-factly. “I would have to keep coming back for more and more, I know I would. Plus, I’m looking to date you too.”

“Well maybe you might get lucky after all tonight then,” Raine winked playfully in response and the banter continued.

At around 6p.m, a voice floated up through the house announcing whoever it was was home.

“Come on, meet my mum!” Bill exclaimed cheerfully. Instantly Raine felt nervous but Bill was never one to take no for an answer so she found herself being dragged down the stairs, off to meet his mum.

Stood in the kitchen was a short woman with dirty blonde hair and pretty brown eyes. She had soft, delicate features and Raine could see where the twins had inherited their femininity.

“Mum!” Bill exclaimed. “Meet Raine.”

He pulled Raine forward and she stood before Mrs. Kaulitz, gaping like a fish.

“Hello dear, its nice to meet you,” Mrs Kaulitz said, extending a hand. “Bill’s told me so much about you…he never shuts up!”

“Uh…nice to meet you too Mrs. Kaulitz.”

“Call me Simone, please,” Simone replied. “Mrs. Kaulitz makes me feel old.”

“Uh ok, Simone,” Raine replied.

“So what have you two been up to?” Simone asked casually as she made herself a coffee.

“Just talking and stuff,” Bill replied. “We’re going out tonight though.”

“Where are you going?” she asked.

“To that place down the high street, Envy,” Bill replied, shrugging. “I told you about it on Thursday.”

“Oh, yeah, I remember,” Simone said, shaking her head. “Is Tom going as well?”

“Not with us, no,” Bill replied. “It’s uh, just us going.”

“Oh, like a date!” Simone replied. “That’s so cute!”

Bill blushed crimson as his mum cooed over him. “Anyway, we’re going back upstairs.”

“Ok, be quiet up there though, have some respect for the fact that I’m home, unlike that brother of yours,” Simone replied, sighing.

“Mum!” Bill exclaimed. “It’s not like that.”

“Whatever you say Bill,” she replied in that infuriating tone of hers which clearly stated she didn’t believe him in the slightest. He dragged Raine out of the room and upstairs once more. They went back to his room and continued to talk as he began getting ready, deciding on an outfit and all. He changed in the bathroom and once he returned, began to do his hair and make up which took about an hour and a half.

He was finally ready at 8p.m. and the two were preparing to leave.

“We’re off!” Bill cried out in way of goodbye before quickly shutting the door and heading down the path. They walked in silence, enjoying the crisp night air though both curiously wondered what to do with their free hands.

Finally, Bill took the plunge and grasped Raine’s hand with his own, entangling his fingers within her. They walked hand in hand to the club and got in line. It took a full hour for them to get in, the line was so long.

The club was dimly lit. There was a bar in one corner illuminated by green neon lights. A dancefloor took up half the club with a DJ stand in the far corner. In a darker area of the club, plush, white sofas were situated, for those who preferred to get cosy with one another over dancing.

Bill led Raine over to the bar and they both ordered a drink, sipping it slowly whilst talking. The place was still pretty empty as it was early so the music was a bit lower than normal, making it easier to talk.

A few more drinks later and the place started to fill up. The music was pumping and the drinks were flowing between the two. Alcohol helped to relax and loosen them up and before either really knew it, they were dancing and giggling away on the dance floor.

It was tiring work and there were so many people crowding around them that space was limited so it was no wonder they were invading each other’s personal space. Being so close was intoxicating and before long, the kissing had resumed with as much intensity as it had in the park that day.

His kissed honestly left her thoughtless. Nothing else crossed her mind but Bill’s lips and the way that tongue ring of his would dance tantalizingly across the roof of her mouth, causing to shiver. He was way too good at this.

“Come on,” he whispered as they pulled away from one another. “Time for another drink.”

He led her over to the bar in a daze though she soon pulled out of it when he handed her a bright pink drink. “What’s this?”

“A frozen strawberry daiquiri,” Bill replied, grinning devilishly. “I thought it was appropriate for you, as you’re such a hot strawberry and all.”

She blushed but accepted the drink. “Have you found my strawberry yet?”

“What?” he asked curiously.

“I’m wearing a strawberry,” she replied. “Have you found it yet?”

“No!” he exclaimed. “Where is it?”

“Ah, you’ll have to look,” she replied, shrugging.

“Can I see it now?” he pressed as he looked her over carefully, even examining her hair for a possible clip or something.

She smirked at him before taking a sip of her drink, her eyes locked with his over the rim of her glass. She shook her head once in reply and his eyes bugged out.

“Will you let me see it?” he asked uncertainly.

“If you think you can handle finding it,” was her demure reply.

“I’m pretty sure I can,” he said. “Can I try finding it now?”

“Here? No,” she replied, grinning at him.

“how about we go somewhere else then?”

“Where did you have in mind?” she asked as the sipped the last of her strawberry daiquiri; she had to admit, the drink was heavenly though it was going to her head just a little bit.

“Well, Tom’s out, mum’s on a date with Gordon…my house is pretty empty,” he replied. “I was thinking I could show you to my room once more.”

“It was a nice room,” Raine replied, nodding happily. “Very welcoming and comfy! Ok, let’s go.”

He led her out of the club and into the dark night once more. They walked hand in hand, back to his house along a well lit street, passing many people along the way. One glance at the clock tower situated in the park beside Bill’s home let the two know it was nearing 1am already…time had flown by whilst the two were out.

“Bill, are you sure you want this?” Raine asked, stopping outside his door before he could unlock it.

“Yes of course I am, why wouldn’t I be?” Bill asked.

“It’s just, well, Tom mentioned you were a virgin and all so I know this might be a big thing for you,” Raine rambled.

“Tom talks out of his ass,” Bill sighed. “I love my brother and all but he really does talk bullshit a lot of the time. Trust me Raine, I’m not a virgin, I’m just not a whore like him.”

“Oh,” Raine replied, eyes widening. This changed things considerably. “Ok then, let’s go inside.”

“Good, I wanna find that strawberry,” he replied eagerly.

“What is this thing you have for strawberries?” Raine asked as he fiddled with his key in the door.

“Let’s just say it’s a new craving of mine,” he replied, winking at her. “Now, fancy coming in for something just as sweet and fulfilling?”
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PostSubject: Re: Strawberries [PART 19]   Strawberries [PART 19] - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeSun Aug 24 2008, 10:19

^oh..oh...oh.that was just so hot!
MORE! and sooner than this!
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aaaa so sweet
it was worth waiting Chloe!!!
hmmm...where is the strawberry??
Poor Tye shes so sad
MORE and pls dont let us wait so long we are curious little girls you know.....
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PostSubject: Re: Strawberries [PART 19]   Strawberries [PART 19] - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeSun Aug 24 2008, 17:10

oh where s that naughty strawberry eh Question i wanna read more i just startred to read this fan fic today and now that i started it i wanna know how it is going to end
bitte chloe write the next chappie so soon BITTEEEEEEEEEE:!Exclamation!Exclamation!Exclamation!Exclamation!Exclamation
bdw gr8 writing and everything keep it up
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PostSubject: Re: Strawberries [PART 19]   Strawberries [PART 19] - Page 3 I_icon_minitimeSun Aug 24 2008, 18:38

1 word


MARVOLOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! if thats how you spell it xD

more?.....
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^^actually it spells marvelous sav! lol! doesnt matter!

i like it a lot chloe, pls post mehr when u can!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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