Not any more.

OH MY GOD!
i just read all the Chapters and i feel...drained...honestly. it was amazing reading tht stuff at one go!
u're a genius!
and i'm in time for the climax! YES!
i cant wait! pls write soon!

im sorry i havent been here lately.. my computer kinda died. but here it is now.. the last chapter..

Chapter 16 – That night

She gazed at the few visible stars and then at him. His eyes seemed to be like stars, only brighter, the only stars she needed to survive. He smiled as he wiped off some her eye liner which was running due to the rain. His very touch sent shivers up and down her spine, making her blush as she bit her lower lip slightly. He held her close, and his lips brushed against hers, lingering there teasingly for a few seconds before kissing her fully. Her arms circled his waist, as he pulled her closer to him, the rain started to fall again but they didn’t stop.

She didn’t know what happened.. or where she was.. “Bill? Bill what happened?” no one answered her.. she tried again “Bill?! “ she wondered whether she had fainted again. That must have been what happened... It had to be.. Suddenly the lights switched on,
“Keerah! Get up you’re going to be late for school”
An icy horrible chill pulsed throughout her entire body.

Her mother left for work, and that evening, her mother found a note;
“Sorry I was late for school mom”

That night Tokio Hotel lost a fan. That night she was found dead, both wrists freshly slit. That night pool of blood surrounded her, and she was paler than ever. That night, as she bled, her heart didn’t have enough blood to work properly, not enough oxygen could be carried to her brain. That night she died, and engraved on the top of her arms were six words in all.
On one arm there was – “Stay with me” and on the other, clearly written with much more anger and pain, were the words “You left me”

THE END –
I know a lot of you are disappointed, but you all said how realistic it was and meeting and spending such a wonderful time with Bill... is just not realistic. Death is.

i am in shock and awe...
tht ending was wonderful! and i'm glad u made it this way...not the pretty fantasies we make. death is reality, meeting Bill Kauliitz is not.
and now you made me cry and i cant even find a tissue to wipe them off!
but ur story is beautiful. please write more stuff and post it here.
i'd love to read it.

ill try, but there is no garantees, i just get inspired some times, thats it..

^ no problem, but u write really well.


ps. - i love Billsexual!

Oh Mein Gott

When i read fan fictions ... sometimes at the end they make me feel dissapointed coz they re more like fairy tales =\

But yours is more special, it doesn t end like all the others.. with a happy ending and a perfect life [maybe thats why they are called fan fictions]

But real life is not like that so i prefer those that are more realistic... and yours is a perfect example =]]

Keep up your uber great work =]]

And danke for the emotions you gave me while reading it =]

thank you. just felt it, wrote it, and posted it...

Oh Mein Gott!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! grt work charlene!!!!!!!

hmmm kk let me start by telling that i luv this fic!!!!!!!!!! its wonderful!!!!!!!!!
D RESULT of reading this fic: my tummy hurt!!!!! looool

.....................though she didnt deserve it!!!! (i mean her death) poor girl.....

and I think u r very original and i like your style!!!!!!