sweet love or bitter ending??

ok so i wont tell you how i got inspired to write this story as it would be obvious of what will happen and no one would bother read it... anyway hope you enjoy

bdw Tom speaks in yellow
Girl speaks in orange
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On the 21st of November was just one of the usual nights for guitarist Tom Kaulitz aiming to get some at their after party. But for Erin it was going to be one hell of a night so she thought. She was going to be at a Tokio Hotel after party. One hell of a night she won’t ever forget.

One of the biggest shows of the Tokio Hotel’s European tour was taking place tonight in Hollywood Parce Des Princes; And 18 year old blonde girl lined up and waited for the show to get moving so she could get to the after party as soon as possible.

After an hour’s wait the show was about to start. The girl was really enjoying in the show as she sang along to all the songs and felt the passion in Bill’s voice.

After the entire crowd which loved the phenomenal show left. The girl and her friends headed to the club which the after party was going to be held in. They showed up and were accepted to enter the club they bought a drink and soon after the guys from the band had arrived the girl’s eyes zoomed onto Tom and went to get another drink as she danced and giggled with her friends.

She whispered something to her friend and moved to dance close to Tom. Of course Tom noticed her as she was wearing very few clothes and she was pretty she was wearing a mini skirt and a boob tube of course she knew how to catch Tom’s attention cause it worked perfectly. He also moved close to her but she had done her home work before and knew he liked girls which act like they weren’t interested and that play hard to get so she gave him her back and called her friends over. Tom moved closer and asked for her name.

“Hey what’s your name beautiful?”

“Erin.” She replied

“Come dance with me.” He told her and led her away from her friends

She with no need of asking twice accepted and they dance and dance drank then also kissed.

She grabbed his hand and led him to her hotel room which was in the hotel not so far away from the club the after party was in. Obviously she planned everything out perfectly. By the next few minutes both Tom and her where up in her room. As the night went by, the famous guitarist and the sweet blonde girl were making sweet love …..

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Of course Tom noticed her as she was wearing very few clothes.-duhh like tom wouldnt notice a girl like that??

very nice and yea tom's at it again xD

more??

*gasp* when did you put this up? I missed it!
Lol just as good as you made it sound and I'm looking forward to more!! xD

kim i luv it and i cant wait for more!!!!!

pls post mehrrrrr very very soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

KIM!!!!!!!!!
finally i read it, and i loved it...

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