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 Daddy, Do you care??[[part9]]

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PostSubject: Re: Daddy, Do you care??[[part9]]   Daddy, Do you care??[[part9]] - Page 2 I_icon_minitimeSun Jun 15 2008, 23:40

Part: 6
Decication: to all of you who are reading xD
Characters: Father(Tom) and Jay(Tom's wife)
Comment: trying to make the chapters longer
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“That’s great.” Tom said pretending to be over whelmed.
“What did you want to say to me hun?”
“Oh it’s nothing.”
“Okay, you’re happy right? That we’re finally starting a family?” Tom’s wife said unsure
“Of course I am.”
“Ah, that’s good because I thought you were going to give me some bad news when you said we need to talk.”
“Bad news? What kind?”
“That you’re cheating on me or something.”
“NO, Jay I thought you know me enough now to know that I would never cheat on you I love you.”
“I know you do, but it’s like you’ve been avoiding me these past few days?”
“I’m having hard time at work.”
“Okay, honey I’m going to bed”

Jay went of to bed but Tom didn’t even try to sleep, he got his phone and text his brother, he knew that if none knew what to do, Bill would help him.

Hi, bro it’s Tom I need your help, we need to talk. When can we meet? Tomorrow? At my work though! My boss is pissing me off and I’m soon fired.

As Tom pressed the send button Tom started thinking again
He thought about the days when Bill was looking for his one true love and I was always off with one-night stands. He always said I need to think about the future and that I needed to learn what love is. But no I used to just tell him to get lost! Now he’s married to Helena with no problems and I’m lying to my wife and upsetting my son.

Tom’s thoughts were interrupted by Bill’s reply

Hi Tom,
So tomorrow at 2 p.m. okay for you? Can’t wait to see you, I hope you’ll be alright and nothing’s so complicated! See you tomorrow bro, Helena says hi.


Bill’s message put a tiny smile on Tom’s face he sends a message back to him

Yes Bill see you tomorrow at 2, and thanks. Hope you’re both alright I’m off to bed.

He send the message and goes to have a little lie down maybe try to sleep.
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Omg loved it! Poor Tom, more problems, he just never gets a break does he!
*dances* you used the name I gave you!! Helena is special to me so you using it is COOL!!!
Looking forward to more hun Very Happy Very Happy<3
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Cant wait till more xxx
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PostSubject: Re: Daddy, Do you care??[[part9]]   Daddy, Do you care??[[part9]] - Page 2 I_icon_minitimeTue Jun 17 2008, 15:13

Another interesting chap.

PWEASE PWWEASSE continue more as soon as possible.

waiting 4 more omg yay

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PostSubject: Re: Daddy, Do you care??[[part9]]   Daddy, Do you care??[[part9]] - Page 2 I_icon_minitimeThu Jul 10 2008, 19:02

writing a new chapter now
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PostSubject: Re: Daddy, Do you care??[[part9]]   Daddy, Do you care??[[part9]] - Page 2 I_icon_minitimeThu Jul 10 2008, 19:18

Part: 7
Decication: to all of you who are reading xD
Characters: Father(Tom), Jay(Tom's wife), Bill and Dick(Tom's boss)
Comment: trying to make the chapters longer
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“Tom get up quick it’s late! Its 8a.m you were supposed to be at work an hour ago!” Jay nudged Tom.
Tom got up in a hurry and looked at his phone it really was 8 he just got dressed and got in the car.

As he got to work he got called into his boss’ office.
“You know why I called you in here right?” His boss said in a sarcastic voice.
“Because I’m late?”
“Exactly! Because you’re late. This is a warning if you’re late again just don’t bother coming in at all! What am I paying you for!?”
“I’m sor-” Tom got cut of by his boss
“Don’t bother saying it go get started!”
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“How is Mr Kaulitz feeling this Saturday morning!?” A firm voice from the door said.
“Billlllll” Tom squeaked like a little child “I’m so excited to see you!”
Tom’s mobile phone interrupted the twins’ reunion

-Tom on the phone-
“Hello?”
“What?”
“How?”
“Will he be okay?”
“I’m on my way”

“Bill that’s the hospital Ty is in hospital” Tom said all panicked and nearly crying
“What’s wrong with him?”
“I don’t know they wouldn’t tell me!”

Tom and Bill rushed out of the room and drove to the hospital
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Ooo!! Oh no, has he been beaten by his mother? Oh you can't just leave it there!!! Continue pleeeease!!! Looking forward to mroe!!!
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chp 8 is written on paper but i think it's going to stay there...
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pleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaseeeeee post the next chap we want it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


we reeeaaaallllyyyyyy dooooooooooooooooooo
ppl are just reading and not reviewing i know it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Part: 8
Decication: to all of you who are reading xD
Characters: Father(Tom), Bill and Doctor
Comment: trying to make the chapters longer
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Bill tried to keep Tom calm as he was the one driving.

“Tom clam down everything is going to be just fine!”

“It already isn’t Bill, Ty is in hospital and I have no idea what happened whether he’s alive or not!!”

“Let me drive you’re shaking and that’s the second car you nearly hit!”

“Bill shut up you’re not helping. We’re here”

Tom parked the car in a wrong place but he couldn’t care less about that. He ran as fast as he could to the hospital reception.

“Tyrone Kaulitz is were?” Tom said panicked

“Who are you?”

“I’m his father where is I want to see him!?” Tom said getting frustrated.

“I’m afraid you can’t for now. Please go and sit there the doctor will be with you shortly!” The lady at the desk said pointing to a room full of empty blue chairs

“Are you going to tell me what’s wrong with my son for f*ck’s sake?” Tom shouted. Bill made a sign to the lady to ignore Tom and leaded him to the waiting room.
Tom sat down shaking like mad he held on to his extra large jeans and put his head down to his hands.

“Why is all of this happening to me?”

“Tom I don’t really know what is happening but I’m sure everything will be ok.” Bill assured tom

The doctor came into the room with a disappointed look on his face Tom rushed up of his set and asked the doctor.

“Is he ok?” The doctor just shook his head and replied

“I’m sorry we still don’t know there something wr-wrong the boy has not opened his eyes since he got here!”

Tom’s eyes turned red full of tears.

“Who bought him here?”

“This lady came in said he fell down the stairs gave us your number and left.” Tom looked shocked this couldn’t be Maria!

“I’m very sorry to say this but it doesn’t look like he fell down the stairs, He could have been pushed, something may have fallen on top of him…. This is serious!”

“But will he be ok?”

“The possibilities are 3 he can be perfectly fine, he could have brain damage or loss of sight!” Tom just collapsed down on the white tiles floor.

“I’m sorry” The doctor said once again.

“Can I see him?”

“Yes, but he’s not going to talk to you as I said he haven’t opened his eyes.”

Tom was terrified to enter the room but having his brother there with him helped. He pushed the door and stepped in. His son looked almost dead his face so pale Tom couldn’t help but cry!

Tom’s thoughts
Seeing Ty in this state just hurts me so much I could feel his pain? It is all my fault.


Tom’s mobile phone rang Tom looked at his son before answering waiting for a reaction form his son to the sound nothing his son laid deadly on the white sheets.

Tom on the phone:
“What?”
“Oh…Boss”
“I’m sorry”
“Fired??”
“Please I need the job!”
“Hello?? Hello??”

“Great just great!!” Tom said
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Oh man ! as if things werent bad enough, he had to get fired as well !!! damn boss lol !!! xP

I really like it... **cries** for chapter 9 Wink hope to read it soon xD

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Mehr bitter kim
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
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As if the world wasn't shitting on tom enouogh! I hope things turn around and i hope his son's ok!! he needs happiness and hugs *hugs*!!!

Oh I so need to read more!!!! Pleeeeease post more if you have!!!
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Part: 9
Decication: to all of you who are reading xD
Characters: Father(Tom) and Bill
Comment: trying to make the chapters longer
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Bill understood exactly what had happened and what his brother was feeling. He lowered his eyes and moved closer to his brother then hugged him and they assured each other with the hug Tom moved closely to the bed his son still laid on with no movement. Tom’s eyes flooded by the second as he remembered the words that echoed in his head ‘I’ll tell her soon I promise!’

“Bill this is all my fault.” Tom said sniffing as he grabbed Tyrone’s little hand “Don’t leave me son I love you!”

Bill dragged the chair next to his brother he sat down and told Tom
“Try to relax a bit bro and tell me what’s happening.”

Tom shook his head “Maria is doing this to Ty she’s been hitting him constantly and I can’t do anything about it! And I can’t tell Helen about him because she’s-”

“She’s what Tom??” Bill said curios

“Pregnant Bill”

“It’s going to be ok Tom we’ll take Ty for a while until you sort everything out” Bill said generously

“Thank you Bill I really appreciate it I really love Ty and I want to be a full time dad to him” Tom felt his son’s tiny hand holding tightly to his. He looked directly to his son and smiled slightly.

“Bill he heard me; he really did!” Bill smiled back he knew he brother wasn’t lying nor was he crazy.

“He’s going to be just fine Tom don’t you worry! He’s a strong kid!”
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Ah! Bill to the rescue!!! Go Bill! It's so sweet how caring and stuff he is and at least Tom wants to be there for his kid! Looking forward to more (every time u update for some reason it doesn't show me it's been updated.....its being mean!!! Hates me Sad loooll)

Anyway....more puh-lease!
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