Daddy, Do you care??[[part9]]

Part: 1
Decication: Pav, Chloe ,Lulu and who ever is going to read it...
Characters: Father(Tom), Son and wife
Comment: You are not going to understand for now so i'll post depending on how many comments i get.
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He asked his boss politely to take the rest of the night off; his boss agreed but said he had to stay over time tomorrow. He agreed determined to get to his sons performance in time. He got there just in time as he got there he saw his son on a wall with his knees pulled up to his face looking confused shivering cold ready for his performance in his costume wondering if someone was coming to watch him perform. The father got out of his car and walked over to his son still out of words.

“Come in son I’m here to see you are you going to impress me?” The father said to his son while he kissed him on his forehead and wished him good luck. The boy nodded softly and hugged his father in form of respect.

The father walked in the school hall and got a seat and waited for his son’s turn to go on stage, as his son did his phone rang nudging everyone next to him he got up and rushed out side, his son felt sorry for him self he thought and just smiled. The father came back into the hall as his son’s song had just finished he got up and clapped.

He had come to the show for nothing the few minuets his son was on stage he missed them.

As the show was finished his son came out from back stage his father kissed him again. But said no words they both went to the car and the father put his son into the car and closed the door. He got in and just drove with no words.

He stopped the car and waited for his son to come out.
“Daddy can’t I come home with you?” The son asked with those big blue shining eyes full of tears waiting to run down his little cheeks.
“I’m sorry son I haven’t told her about you yet, go on now mummy will be waiting.” The son looked down and went to the door.

The father got home as his wife waited.
“Were have you been?” The wife asked her husband curious.
“I told you when you called I had to stay over at work.” The husband said not looking his wife in her eyes.
“Okay, let’s go to bed now” The wife said believing her husband. He nodded kissed her softly and pretended to sleep.

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what do you think?

Hmmm very interesting. You're right, it is a bit confusing but then, some of the best stories usually are, means it isn't completely see through from the start Looking forward to more...I think I can sort of see what might be going on though! Eager now!

I already <3 it =]]]

Awww poor kid =[ I hope his life gets a bit better

Mehr when you can twinny =]]]

* Tom don't you dare treat the poor kid badly again! * Sry i just had to do that xD

Part: 2
Decication: Chloe ,Lulu and who ever is going to read it...
Characters: Father(Tom), Son and Son's mother
Comment: ........
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He kept moving all night his wife woke up at 2 in the morning and called him but again he pretended to be asleep. She just thought he was having a bad dream…. He woke up earlier than he usually did to avoid his wife. He got washed and left for work before his wife had woken up. He decided to go for his son and drive him to school. He rang the door bell twice and his son came down ready for school.

“Daddy’s taking you to school today boy.” His son slightly smiled and walked to the car. His dad lifted him up and his son told him that he was hurting him the father looked weirdly he wasn’t holding his son in a way he could hurt he put him in the car and sat down at the back next to him for a minute he put up his son’s shirt a saw a big purple patch.

“Oh my son what did you do there??” The father said panicking. The son didn’t answer he just looked down and sniffed. His father kept asking his son finally his son looked up and whispered.
“Mummy did this and she said that she would hurt me if I told anyone” The father could not help going up to the boys mother and tell her about this he ran straight to her apartment and went up stairs, her apartment was a mess!! Wine bottles ever where, cigarette packs also and it smelled awful the father was disgusted. He shouted.
“Why did you hurt my son!?” The mother denied what she had done
“I didn’t do anything”
“Than what’s that my son has on his stomach?”
“He fell down the stairs”
The father got madder at the boys mother and screamed louder.
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next chp probably tomorrow

Oh man, poor kid, being abused, know what that's like. I hope he kicks her trailer trash ass! This story is alredy really sad and it's only two chapters long! Looking forward to more hun!

i perfectly agree with RavynK

*Go Tom Go Tom* we re all with you =]]

mehr when you can =]]

i <3 it soo much
cnt wait to see what happens

LLLOOOOVVVEEEEE it kim .. more more more please .!!!!!!!!.

Part: 3
Decication: Chloe ,Lulu and who ever is going to read it...
Characters: Father(Tom), Son and Son's mother
Comment: Sorry the chapters are so short
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“You know I can’t take him home with me why are you doing this to OUR son?”
“He was a mistake, that one night was a mistake!”
The father was so hurt by what she had just said. He just moved his head from side to side and left the house. He went to his son and found him crying again.
“I can’t take you to work with me son but I’ll pick you up after school I promise” His son just moved his face from his father’s. Tom got in the car and drove off to take his son to school after some time of silence he whispered.
“I’m sorry son you know I am I can’t do anything!”
“Your wife is more important than me its okay I understand.”
“Don’t do that you know you mean everything to me!” The father replied pulling up.
“Hmm…” The son just said and got out of the car.

its great! i luff it x) even though it is a sad story... geez.. poor kid.

Write more when possible please.

[[p.s. can you make them a lil bit longer, the chaps please?? thank-ya]]

keep it on the move

Cool chapter, it's so sad and full of feeling!! Love it

Oh Kim, this ff is awesome **
Knowing Tom, one wouldn't be surprised with him having an ex-wife and a newly married one XD
But I would not have expected him to be so protective towards his son ... that is soooo cute of him <3
My my my, what a wonderful dad he is !!!!

oh gott ='[[

more when you can bitte

More More More bitte XDXDXD xxxx

Part: 4
Decication: to all of you who are reading xD
Characters: Father(Tom), Son and Son's mother
Comment: trying to make the chapters longer
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Tom took off for work. At 2 p.m. he asked his boss again for the rest of the night off.
“I’m sorry, my friends needs me to pick up her 7 year old son from school.”
“Up to you, though you should know if this is going to keep happening you can lose your job!”

He knew he had to go pick up his son but he couldn’t lose his job, so he stayed at work.

Tyrone waited and waited for his father to come and pick him up it was 6 p.m. Tom left work and went to see his son at home he rang the bell and Maria opened the door and he asked.
“Where’s Ty?”
“I don’t know he never came home” she said all calm.
“So you didn’t bother to go see where he is?”
“I thought you were picking him up?”
“I couldn’t my boss said I could lose my job.”

He rushed to his car a left to see if his son was still on the roads. He tried on roads but saw him nowhere. He tried out side the kid’s school and there he was, still with his small backpack on his little back, sitting on the school stairs rocking himself from side to side playing with his little hands. Tom ran to his son as he was going to put his hand on Tyrone’s shoulder he moved it away, and got into the car, As his red eyes from crying looked at his father and whispered.
“You promised!”
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Kimmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm i need more please write bitte bitte xxxxxxxxxx

Kim this is sooooo emotional =[[

Keep it up

<3 it =]

Mehr when you can =]

you should know i have another chapter ready but not going to post it yet

Awww !! this last paragrph broke my heart ... i mean, how could they let him wait there all alone and scared?!!

please keep on writing... i wanna know whats gonna happen to this situation !

great job luflij. you're a great writer.

Aww that was just too sad!!! You have to update though, you're driving me crazy!!!!! MORE! poor tyrone! Seriously it is a good story. Tom's boss and Tyrone's mother really suck ass! Tom has to triumph over them in the end!

Part: 5
Decication: to all of you who are reading xD specialy RyvanK she knows why
Characters: Father(Tom), Son and Jay(Tom's wife)
Comment: trying to make the chapters longer
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Tom was out of words and shocked.
“I’m so sorry! Why didn’t you walk home all this time out here you must be freezing cold?”
“I prefer being out side than getting hit by mommy.”
“I will try to talk to Jay soon I promise.”
“Daddy I may just be seven years old but I know things, don’t make promises you can’t keep” Tyrone talked like an old boy. Tom could not say another word he just got in a drove him home.
“Bye son see you soon” Tom said watching his son walk away form him once again. Ty walked to the door and rang the bell. From the car Tom saw Maria open the door and pull Tyrone in by his hair. Tom felt so sorry for his son but could do nothing so he pretended that he didn’t see that.

“Jay I’m home” Tom called for his wife, “We need to talk”
“Yes we do I need to tell you something” She said all excited.
“You go first.” Tom said letting his wife go first.
“Well I was missing my you know once in a month thing by a week and I tried a pregnancy test today” Tom took a big breath in shock “We’re starting a family.”
“Oh my lord!” Tom whispered as he hugged his wife.

Tom’s thoughts
What am I supposed to do now? I had a one-night stand and had a son. I got married and I was happy but never told her about my son I was going to today but she just told me she’s pregnant. I should have listened to my brother years ago! How am I going to tell my son I’m having another baby?
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now you'll have to wait long for next chp hugz to all

OMG! As if tom wasn't in enough trouble! Damn I hope he manages to have a family and include Tyrone in it as well! Oo is Bill going to make an appearance? Glad you added part 5, i was dying to read it!!! Looking forward to more

Kim ur just EVIL ..
Pure EVIL..
But still ily lol..xxx

aww this is soo cutee.. i love it.. best fic in weeks

more probs =[[

hope Tyrone will feel a bit better soon =]