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PostSubject: The way up to heaven => [part5]   The way up to heaven => [part5] I_icon_minitimeTue Apr 29 2008, 17:54

Chapter 1 : Bad Day For Bill..
(writing this chapter while listening to song Bad Day)

When all the world was sleeping,young Bill was still starring at his window and writing in his diary as he usually does. Tonight was different he was not smiling at all actually he was seemed to feel sad, depressed and confused but "why?".

That day Bill when he woke up found a letter on his bed written for him by his brother, Tom. He wondered why that day Tom did wake up to write a letter instead of waiting for Bill to wake up and talk to him face to face.

Bill taught it was a surprise or something good from his brother so he opened it with a smile and excitement on his face and began to read the letter :

"Dear Brother,
I know you have been surprised opening the letter because it is not a normal thing from me as your brother leave you a letter instead of talking to you when you wake up. For me the thing I want to tell you is hard so I preferred to write you a letter. Brother, tonight I am going abroad because I am fed up living the same life again and again everyday, here is nothing new to do so today when I get back home I pick my luggages and just go by.. Sorry Sad..
Your Brother,
Tom."


Bill was really shocked reading the letter and stood still wondering alone why his brother done that to him.

"Why did he do this to me?
Did I made something wrong for him?"
he taught alone.

"How am I going to live without him alone?" he cried.

Then he waited quietly for his brother, till Tom returned home he was still wondering about the letter.

(Clue Chapter 2 : When Tom got back home...)


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OMG really really really really sweet ^^

i'm really looking forward to the next chapter Smile it's very nice and very sweet ^^
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PostSubject: The way up to heaven => [part2]   The way up to heaven => [part5] I_icon_minitimeWed Apr 30 2008, 10:42

Here is chapter 2 of the story...
Story := Bill and Tom
Dedication := KIM[<3]T.H..Tom, Bill..Kaulitz..my..angel

Conversation := Bill - orange
Tom - Blue

Chapter 2: When Tom got back home...

After 4pm Bill was still in his shock and heard the door open. It was obviously his brother Tom that he waited for him a really long time that day. He did not give him a chance to go inside...

"Where did you go?" he asked.

"I went to book my flight" he replied sadly.

"Whatt?" Bill asked emotionally.

"I went to book my flight" Tom said the same word again, sadly.

"Whoaa, are you kidding me?? You're kidding right??" Bill asked surprised but did not give any time for Tom to answer...

"I taught the letter was a joke but I still was shocked..a letter in the morning..but..but..but brother how could you do this to me?" Bill asked emotionally again...

"Brother, I told you in the letter cannot live the same life again, I have my own life, you have yours, so everyone does what he wants." Tom replied.

"What?" Bill screamed.. "You think my life will be better without you??..Tom just tell you're joking.." Bill had a break but Tom didn't answer so he continued.. "Seriously me? Me living alone without you?? Tom you know I can't imagine my life without you, so you have the heart to leave me here alone..You..you have that conscience??" Bill always talking in an emotionally voice..

"No, Bill I have a heart and I love you more than I love myself and yes I even have a conscience and I care for you too, Bill tell me that you know it is hard for me too??..." Tom replied..

"HARD? You are asking if it is hard?? If it is hard for you, how much it is hard for me? Because you chose to go abroad but I didn't choose to stay alone.." Bill replied angrily.

"I really know and I am so SORRY but I couldn't live like this, If you don't mind I will be in Malta if you would like to come in summer as a vacation and live with me it's no problem..." Tom had a break so Bill can reply but he didn't "Oh, it's time for me to go, any chance for last hug?" Tom asked crying..

Bill just turned around at the window like no one is talking to him...

(Clue Chapter 3 : The writing in the diary and when Tom left home...)
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PostSubject: Re: The way up to heaven => [part5]   The way up to heaven => [part5] I_icon_minitimeWed Apr 30 2008, 10:46

oh god this is so cute!
more please
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more is coming tomorrow i try to post a chapter everyday Smile
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PostSubject: Re: The way up to heaven => [part5]   The way up to heaven => [part5] I_icon_minitimeWed Apr 30 2008, 14:16

i feel guilty for not posting today. i got so involved into habbo
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PostSubject: Re: The way up to heaven => [part5]   The way up to heaven => [part5] I_icon_minitimeWed Apr 30 2008, 14:26

dont worry i know you will right..

and i wrote today because i did not know about it Smile
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yeah..i guess
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gr8 fan fic rachel =]

keep it upp ^^
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PostSubject: Re: The way up to heaven => [part5]   The way up to heaven => [part5] I_icon_minitimeWed Apr 30 2008, 21:14

ohhhhhhh goddddddd like moreeeeeeeee nowwwwwww??
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PostSubject: Re: The way up to heaven => [part5]   The way up to heaven => [part5] I_icon_minitimeThu May 01 2008, 16:51

Here is chapter 3 of the story...this is a short chapter only for the letter..
Story := Bill and Tom
Dedication := KIM[<3]T.H..Tom, Bill..Kaulitz..my..angel, kaulitzgirl, Luanagk

Chapter 3 : The writing in the diary and when Tom left home...

When Tom left home, Bill began searching for the things that his brother had gave him, tore them all and threw them away. After that day of sadness for the two of the twins, came the night, the first night Bill was going to be alone so he described that day in his diary:

"Dear diary,
Today was a surprise waking up finding a letter on my bed from my brother Tom. It is not a usual thing he does that only to make a joke for me so I opened the letter surprised. When I began to read I found a sentence that shocked me and my heart stopped beating for a while "Brother, tonight I am going abroad...". I waited for my brother home and when he came we got into a fight but we were fighting sadly not because we want to. Then when it was time for him to go he asked me for a hug but i didn't hug him and now that he went I am feeling really guilty because for me my brother comes before anything else but that time I was really angry with him. Hope he forgives me but I know he understood why I did that.
Yours
Bill"


After he wrote the letter Bill was very tired and slept the worst night ever, ALONE..

(Clue Chapter 4 : First day at School without Tom...)
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PostSubject: Re: The way up to heaven => [part5]   The way up to heaven => [part5] I_icon_minitimeThu May 01 2008, 17:13

awwh...u make me sad.
its unfair...bring em back together...NOW! : Sad Crying or Very sad confused headache big mouth =SS confused
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PostSubject: Re: The way up to heaven => [part5]   The way up to heaven => [part5] I_icon_minitimeThu May 01 2008, 17:16

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeee like nowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: The way up to heaven => [part5]   The way up to heaven => [part5] I_icon_minitimeThu May 01 2008, 18:01

oww kaulitzgirl I know it is sad but i give you a clue in the story NOT NOW they are going to be TOKIO HOTEL just wait and see The way up to heaven => [part5] Icon_razz


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PostSubject: Re: The way up to heaven => [part5]   The way up to heaven => [part5] I_icon_minitimeFri May 02 2008, 07:32

YAY they'll be BACK!...WOOT WOOT....i'm so happy now... Laughing Rolling Eyes The way up to heaven => [part5] Icon_razz Very Happy Smile
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PostSubject: Re: The way up to heaven => [part5]   The way up to heaven => [part5] I_icon_minitimeFri May 02 2008, 11:21

hehe i am glad youre happy Smile
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PostSubject: Re: The way up to heaven => [part5]   The way up to heaven => [part5] I_icon_minitimeFri May 02 2008, 13:20

how many chapters left ?
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dunno i am still writing
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[-rejxil.TH-] wrote:
dunno i am still writing

kk nice btw
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OMG it's beautiful! really emotional! it made me cryy!!!!.....................I WANT MORE PLSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Bill..Kaulitz..my..angel wrote:
OMG it's beautiful! really emotional! it made me cryy!!!!.....................I WANT MORE PLSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE NOW!!!
I love it ^^
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Chapter 4 : First day at school without Tom
Story := Bill and Tom

Dedication := Kaulitz brother, KIM[<3]T.H..Tom, Bill..Kaulitz..my..angel, kaulitzgirl, Luanagk, svety

Conversation :
Jason - white
Teacher - Violet
Bill - Orange
Head Master - Green


After that uncomfortable night, Bill woke up for a new day but this time with a little difference "without his brother". He went to pick up the bus for school as usual and when he arrived at school everybody was starring at him.

"Hey Bill, what's up?" Jason asked happily but Bill didn't answer just waved and continued walking and thinking.

It was time for class and Bill entered his classroom as usual. While the teacher was doing the attendance Bill was crying because he saw the seat beside him empty and normally his brother, Tom, sits there.

"Bill Kaulitz" the teacher said.

"Here I am" Bill repliead crying.

"Tom Kaulitz" the teacher said his brothers name and no one answered.

"Bill were is Tom?" the teacher asked.

"He is not here, are you seeing him here?" Bill replied angrily.

"That's why I am asking because he is not here, is he sick?" the teacher asked worried.

"No" Bill replied quietly.

"Well, ok maybe he did not want to come, hope we see him tomorrow then!" the teacher said.

"No!! You are not going to see him again in your entire life!!" Bill said angrily and ran fast out of the class crying.

Bill went to the head of school to form him about his brother. So he knocks on the door and wait.

"Yes? Come in" said the head master.

"I am here just to tell you that my brother went abroad so he is not coming to school anymore and NEITHER ME! Can I sign the papers so that I don't come anymore too?" Bill asked.

"Yes you can if that is what you want" the head master replied.

Bill signed the papers and went out of that sad school forever..

(Clue Chapter 5 : A letter from Tom)
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