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XMissXKaulitzX89X
Number of posts : 178 Age : 31 Location : too far away from Bill. Job/hobbies : istening to tokio hotel, and also heavy metal, and writing poems and making music. Humor : hmm... Registration date : 2008-05-13
| Subject: Durch den Monsun. - 8 th chappie!!! Mon Jul 28 2008, 11:12 | |
| Chapter one >> Kelly Ann’s pov
His eyes shone, his smiled twinkled. His hair was held down due to a cap. From a lions mane, to something so tame.. Black and beautiful, with lovely blond highlights. There he was.. well, they said he wasn’t. But I swear I saw him.. I saw him, he was right there.. right in front of me.. I wanted to say something but I froze. He probably wouldn’t have heard me anyway, he seemed so busy, scared that some one might recognize him.. I did.. But I didn’t act on it.. My heart pounded in my ears, like a base drum. I couldn’t breath for quite some time.. My body just wouldn’t respond. I wanted to yell out to him, say hi.. I wondered if he remembered me.. did he? Does he? Does he ever think of me.. the way I think of him.. I just wanted to run my fingers through that long black hair, with highlights, much like rays of light, kiss those sweet lips.. It wasn’t always like that you know.. He used to have short hair.. spiked still, but shorter. His fringe used to stick out in front of half of that beautifully symmetrical face.. But he still wore liner at the time.. So most of it was the same. His laugh is the same is I remember it. It still echoes in my head at night.. makes me laugh with it.. Anyway.. back to the past; Most of the girls at the school used to call him a girl. I just wanted to be his girl. It was like a cute crush I had for him, at least that s what they said.. I always thought it was more, much more. And as a matter of fact, I still think so… I still cherish the tiny conversations we had together.. They were mostly about school stuff, like next classes and stuff. I had some classes with him. I failed that class. Never paid any attention.. well not to the teacher at least. I paid attention to him.. Every little move was so sweet. It was perfection in my eyes… It still is, and it will stay like that.. I really think it will. It won’t change, I’ll never get over him. My heart will never be free from him.. With each beat I can feel his captivity on it, as if his fingers are entwined around it, holding it, reminding me with every beat that my heart is his..
And the worst part is.. he doesn’t even know it..
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| | | xXxKirstyxXx
Number of posts : 550 Age : 29 Location : Zabbar Job/hobbies : listening music,[TH]out,laugh xD etc.. Humor : always laughing xD Registration date : 2008-04-05
| Subject: Re: Durch den Monsun. - 8 th chappie!!! Mon Jul 28 2008, 18:17 | |
| very beautiful and discriptive well done more when you can plss... ________________ I'm addicted to drugs...I mean...TOKIO HOTEL | |
| | | th4immer
Number of posts : 1195 Age : 30 Location : Mosta , Malta Job/hobbies : Listening 2 music a lot! (mostly th+green day) +Making my friends laugh xd +playing guitar and piano Humor : v. funny+ witty. (laughter is the best medicine anyway so who cares?!) Registration date : 2008-04-20
| Subject: Re: Durch den Monsun. - 8 th chappie!!! Tue Jul 29 2008, 08:35 | |
| Nice, v. nice..I like it a lot xd | |
| | | XMissXKaulitzX89X
Number of posts : 178 Age : 31 Location : too far away from Bill. Job/hobbies : istening to tokio hotel, and also heavy metal, and writing poems and making music. Humor : hmm... Registration date : 2008-05-13
| Subject: Re: Durch den Monsun. - 8 th chappie!!! Tue Jul 29 2008, 11:22 | |
| Chapter 2 >> Andreas
What a day… Bill called today.. then we met at a quiet café, where people rarely go.. It was nice seeing him again, it had been a while. He had his hair down, but he wasn’t wearing his huge glasses like he usually does when he’s ‘undercover’. Any way, we talked a lot. About nothing and everything.. it had been so long. But we had time to catch up on a lot of things which happened to both of us during these last few months. Well I knew most of what they went through, because of the magazines and news and stuff. Even though he told me some of them were quite wrong. And I got some information, which I know most fans would kill me for. Urgh.. I really don’t like the fans. They say they love the guys, but they don’t really know them. Huh.. There was only one who really liked Bill.. I remember her.. Kelly. She was so cute.. and she liked Bill back when no one else did, before Tokio Hotel. That’s why I liked her. But the other problem was that Tom liked her. I don’t think she knew, not with Tom being so shy those days. And she liked Bill.. though I don’t know if he liked her.. I mean.. he did talk about her a lot.. But then again he wrote Durch den Monsun, which he said wasn’t for her.. Though he never did exactly tell us who it was for even though I wouldn’t stop asking him.. Hmm.. Anyway.. | |
| | | RavynK Admin
Number of posts : 3334 Age : 34 Location : Bugibba, Malta Job/hobbies : listening to music, being creative, writing :D Humor : Witty and sarcastic Registration date : 2008-05-07
| Subject: Re: Durch den Monsun. - 8 th chappie!!! Tue Jul 29 2008, 14:32 | |
| Interesting! Looking forward to more The blue colour hurt my eyes though xD | |
| | | Luanagk Admin
Number of posts : 1108 Age : 30 Location : Zurrieq, Malta Job/hobbies : Tokio Hotel & playin the guitar Humor : =/ Registration date : 2008-01-26
| Subject: Re: Durch den Monsun. - 8 th chappie!!! Tue Jul 29 2008, 15:52 | |
| These chappies make me curious x]
More when you can =]]] | |
| | | xXxKirstyxXx
Number of posts : 550 Age : 29 Location : Zabbar Job/hobbies : listening music,[TH]out,laugh xD etc.. Humor : always laughing xD Registration date : 2008-04-05
| Subject: Re: Durch den Monsun. - 8 th chappie!!! Tue Jul 29 2008, 18:01 | |
| v.nice more when you can pls ___________ i'm addicted to drugs... mean...TOKIO HOTEL | |
| | | LoveIsDead
Number of posts : 740 Age : 30 Location : Soton, England Job/hobbies : Listening to TH, Looking at TH, Writing about TH, Reading about TH... Humor : Funny, Stupid, Weird xD Registration date : 2008-06-14
| Subject: Re: Durch den Monsun. - 8 th chappie!!! Tue Jul 29 2008, 18:39 | |
| I like it =] more plsss x] | |
| | | XMissXKaulitzX89X
Number of posts : 178 Age : 31 Location : too far away from Bill. Job/hobbies : istening to tokio hotel, and also heavy metal, and writing poems and making music. Humor : hmm... Registration date : 2008-05-13
| Subject: Re: Durch den Monsun. - 8 th chappie!!! Wed Jul 30 2008, 10:23 | |
| Sorry about the Blue thingie, chloe, but i have diff colours for each persons..
Chapter 3 >> Bill I got up this morning.. had another dream, almost the same as the few previous nights.. It was Kelly Ann. We were in the playground together, playing, but then I could hear the first few riffs of Durch Den Monsun, and I told her I had to go.. and she nodded, but then she disappeared.. Who would have thought? My feelings for her, turned into a song, which turned into a hit, which took me away from the reason I wrote it in the first place.. But I couldn’t never admit it.. Today afternoon I went to meet Andreas… It was great! He took me to this really cool café’. It was really quiet, no one recognized me!! I could have sworn I saw Kelly Ann for a moment… then she disappeared. I tried to smile at her, but I was scared to attract too much attention. Oh god, its been such a long time since the last time I saw Kelly Ann.. But I just let it go.. it probably wasn’t her anyway, I mean, I could have just imagined it.. Judging by last nights dream, it likely that I imagined her.. I dreamed about us.. nothing bad.. just memories.. Back when we were all still in school. I just dream of the way she had started blushing the day I asked her for a pen, and she dropped her books! I think she liked me, Tom always said she did, but I just never got the courage to ask her out. Andreas and I talked for hours, I missed him so much, it had been too long. Being a part of Tokio Hotel is like a full time job, barely any breaks! | |
| | | Luanagk Admin
Number of posts : 1108 Age : 30 Location : Zurrieq, Malta Job/hobbies : Tokio Hotel & playin the guitar Humor : =/ Registration date : 2008-01-26
| Subject: Re: Durch den Monsun. - 8 th chappie!!! Wed Jul 30 2008, 14:06 | |
| yaaaaaay so Bill wrote DDM for Keely Ann.... more when you can bitte =] | |
| | | th4immer
Number of posts : 1195 Age : 30 Location : Mosta , Malta Job/hobbies : Listening 2 music a lot! (mostly th+green day) +Making my friends laugh xd +playing guitar and piano Humor : v. funny+ witty. (laughter is the best medicine anyway so who cares?!) Registration date : 2008-04-20
| Subject: Re: Durch den Monsun. - 8 th chappie!!! Wed Jul 30 2008, 16:08 | |
| I really like this!!! | |
| | | xXxKirstyxXx
Number of posts : 550 Age : 29 Location : Zabbar Job/hobbies : listening music,[TH]out,laugh xD etc.. Humor : always laughing xD Registration date : 2008-04-05
| Subject: Re: Durch den Monsun. - 8 th chappie!!! Thu Jul 31 2008, 12:53 | |
| i like it well done. waiting for more ______________ I'm addicted to drugs...I mean...TOKIO HOTEL | |
| | | XMissXKaulitzX89X
Number of posts : 178 Age : 31 Location : too far away from Bill. Job/hobbies : istening to tokio hotel, and also heavy metal, and writing poems and making music. Humor : hmm... Registration date : 2008-05-13
| Subject: Re: Durch den Monsun. - 8 th chappie!!! Thu Jul 31 2008, 14:20 | |
| Chapter 4 >> Kelly Ann I guess I’ll just have to stay here and dream.. dream of flying away with his hand in mine.. I remember the day I convinced my self to tell him I liked him.. I was going to tell him the truth. I knew what the risks were, and I knew that I would have been crushed if he had said he didn’t like me back.. But when I got to school, things were different. They were suddenly famous! Those who used to call him a girl either yelled it louder, or decided to start liking him. Him, his twin and his friends. So, I hadn’t the time to tell him, I hadn’t the chance. That’s a lie.. I had many chances before, I just never took them. It s all my fault, so now I suffer here without him. Maybe I deserve it.. who am I kidding, of course I do!! I had the chance, 3 simple words “I like you” but no.. I couldn’t say them.. And now I pay for it. I don’t get to look at him five times a week, I don’t get to hear him calling me ‘Kelly Ann’ all my friends always called me ‘kel’ ‘kelly’ or just ‘ann’. He was the only one who called me “Kelly Ann” and I loved it..
Flashback
Hey Kelly Ann! What class do we have now? Umm.. E - English Oh, I hate English, I could never get the language.. Yeah I know, but its not that hard.. I.. I.. I could help you if you want.. Really? Ye- oh hi Tom! hallo Bill, err.. H- Hey Kel, what’s up? Hiya Tomi, nothing, just going to Math. What’s up with you? Um.. not much either,d’you-(Bell rings) Come on, Tom, we gotta hurry up or Ms. Abdilla will kill us if we re late gain!
They all leave to class, and Tom does not get to finish. Flashback over
Tom.. he changed you know, now they say that he has lots of women, but I remember him as being quite shy. He always had that cute grin like he was hiding something mischivious when we talked. I used to call him Tomi.. Tomi, I miss him too, I miss him loads. But in a different way than Bill.. Tom was always a good friend, and fun to hang out with.. he was like my own brother. Not that Bill wasn’t nice, it was that I liked him so much, I could never really be calm around him.. my palms always sweated, I used to stammer like a stupid blondie.. I was never able to say what I meant.. He must have thought I was.. stupid. | |
| | | th4immer
Number of posts : 1195 Age : 30 Location : Mosta , Malta Job/hobbies : Listening 2 music a lot! (mostly th+green day) +Making my friends laugh xd +playing guitar and piano Humor : v. funny+ witty. (laughter is the best medicine anyway so who cares?!) Registration date : 2008-04-20
| Subject: Re: Durch den Monsun. - 8 th chappie!!! Thu Jul 31 2008, 17:30 | |
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| | | LoveIsDead
Number of posts : 740 Age : 30 Location : Soton, England Job/hobbies : Listening to TH, Looking at TH, Writing about TH, Reading about TH... Humor : Funny, Stupid, Weird xD Registration date : 2008-06-14
| Subject: Re: Durch den Monsun. - 8 th chappie!!! Thu Jul 31 2008, 20:52 | |
| yay i love it! well done xD
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| | | xXxKirstyxXx
Number of posts : 550 Age : 29 Location : Zabbar Job/hobbies : listening music,[TH]out,laugh xD etc.. Humor : always laughing xD Registration date : 2008-04-05
| Subject: Re: Durch den Monsun. - 8 th chappie!!! Fri Aug 01 2008, 11:39 | |
| very nice im liking a lot this fic... more when you can plsss xD _____________ I'm addicted to drugs...I mean...TOKIO HOTEL | |
| | | Luanagk Admin
Number of posts : 1108 Age : 30 Location : Zurrieq, Malta Job/hobbies : Tokio Hotel & playin the guitar Humor : =/ Registration date : 2008-01-26
| Subject: Re: Durch den Monsun. - 8 th chappie!!! Fri Aug 01 2008, 12:50 | |
| Woooooooo nice chappie =]
more when you can bitte =] | |
| | | th.princess.lover
Number of posts : 270 Age : 30 Location : b'bugia, malta Job/hobbies : listening to music, drawing a lot, reading & looking at gusti Humor : friendly & hyper!!! xD Registration date : 2008-07-26
| Subject: Re: Durch den Monsun. - 8 th chappie!!! Sat Aug 02 2008, 13:30 | |
| great fic!!! its very interesting and i like it a lot. i want mehr mehr.....pls | |
| | | XMissXKaulitzX89X
Number of posts : 178 Age : 31 Location : too far away from Bill. Job/hobbies : istening to tokio hotel, and also heavy metal, and writing poems and making music. Humor : hmm... Registration date : 2008-05-13
| Subject: Re: Durch den Monsun. - 8 th chappie!!! Mon Aug 04 2008, 12:30 | |
| Chappie 5
Andreas studied her face “You never answered me question.. do you still like him?” Kelly looked at him, biting her lower lip as she thought about the answer. It wasn’t hard, she knew it, she loved him. But she couldn’t really say it.. instead; “How could I not” she whispered “I tried not to.. but I guess that.. uh.. yeah, I still like him” she admitted. “Ha! I knew it..” he said, grinning with satisfaction. Even though as he thought about it he was not so happy about it. Kelly laughed remembering something “How do you always know stuff like this? Remember when you told us Ms. Abdilla was having an affair with Mr.Galea?! No one would believe you, but then it turned out you were right when the janitor walked in on them!” she laughed as priceless memories flooded her mind. They laughed for another hour or so, talking about old times. Then there came a point where a type of content silence fell between them. She smiled happy to have met him again, and thought about maybe meeting Bill again.. she wasn’t sure though.. On the other hand, his thoughts were not so pleasant… He was seriously worried about her. It had been over four years now, and the look on her face at the mention of Bill was.. beautiful, hopeful, excited, happy and yet it made him pity her. Knowing the amount of work they had as a band, it would be hard for her, and they never had any signs that Bill liked Kelly.. Andreas pictured her face again, just as he mentioned Bill, and wondered how long it would be till it turned to plain pain and sadness. Her voice interrupted his thoughts “Andreas.. I know this is a lot to ask.. but could you possibly say hi to them all from me? I miss them all so much” Andreas sighed - he had expected this, and doubted seriously how much good it could be to her if she started talking to them again, but knew that if she had waited for years, keeping her from him any longer wouldn’t really help either. So he nodded “Sure” he said and forced a smile. Kelly grinned reaching over the table to hug him. Then she pulled back “Thank you so much!” she said smiling brightly as her eyes twinkled. Andreas hugged her back, and then nodded “Sure, don’t mention it” he said thinking about her not asking him to help her meet them.. | |
| | | xXxKirstyxXx
Number of posts : 550 Age : 29 Location : Zabbar Job/hobbies : listening music,[TH]out,laugh xD etc.. Humor : always laughing xD Registration date : 2008-04-05
| Subject: Re: Durch den Monsun. - 8 th chappie!!! Tue Aug 05 2008, 11:43 | |
| aaa nice good job more more more ______________ I'm addicted to drugs...I mean...TOKIO HOTEL | |
| | | RavynK Admin
Number of posts : 3334 Age : 34 Location : Bugibba, Malta Job/hobbies : listening to music, being creative, writing :D Humor : Witty and sarcastic Registration date : 2008-05-07
| Subject: Re: Durch den Monsun. - 8 th chappie!!! Fri Aug 08 2008, 23:17 | |
| Interesting....bit sad atm, trying to listen to happy music to lighten to mood and this didn't help but ah well, fanfiction must be read!!! I am the crusader for fanfiction reading whatsit! I better go write mine actually...or people will kill me!
ANYWAY! I went off topic...as usual *rolls eyes*. Es war gut! Mehr wann du hast der Zeit! | |
| | | th.princess.lover
Number of posts : 270 Age : 30 Location : b'bugia, malta Job/hobbies : listening to music, drawing a lot, reading & looking at gusti Humor : friendly & hyper!!! xD Registration date : 2008-07-26
| Subject: Re: Durch den Monsun. - 8 th chappie!!! Sat Aug 09 2008, 21:03 | |
| hmmm...i like it. cant wait for d next chap!!! | |
| | | xXxKirstyxXx
Number of posts : 550 Age : 29 Location : Zabbar Job/hobbies : listening music,[TH]out,laugh xD etc.. Humor : always laughing xD Registration date : 2008-04-05
| Subject: Re: Durch den Monsun. - 8 th chappie!!! Sun Aug 10 2008, 21:11 | |
| - RavynK wrote:
- I am the crusader for fanfiction reading whatsit! I better go write mine actually...or people will kill me!
ANYWAY! I went off topic...as usual *rolls eyes*. Es war gut! Mehr wann du hast der Zeit! i think that yes you better continue them as you are killing me with curiosity im a very curious girl. GET BUSY WRITING pllllllllllss danke... _____________ I'm addicted to drugs...I mean...TOKIO HOTEL | |
| | | XMissXKaulitzX89X
Number of posts : 178 Age : 31 Location : too far away from Bill. Job/hobbies : istening to tokio hotel, and also heavy metal, and writing poems and making music. Humor : hmm... Registration date : 2008-05-13
| Subject: Re: Durch den Monsun. - 8 th chappie!!! Sat Aug 16 2008, 11:28 | |
| Chappie 6
I just got back home. Hanging out with Andreas was awesome.. he is so sweet, and he’s going to talk to Bill and Tom, and the others for me. Oh, I miss them so very much.. I cant believe he knew all along that I had a crush on Bill.. I was so embarrassed, but it wasn’t as bad as I thought, he didn’t laugh or disapprove or anything, he was aactually quite nioce about it. And now he s going to say hi to thwem for me.. I cant believe they got so big that its this hard to reach them.. That’s a lie, I always knew they had the potential to become huge like they did.. just never figure we would lose contact the way we did.. Maybe now I’ll get to see them again.. I wouldn’t know what to do, what to wear, what to say… Not that Joe would ever let me.. oh god if he found out I would be dead soon.. I Oh, there’s the phone!
Andreas pov; Just got back home. And as I promised im going to call Bill, and say hi to him from Kelly.
Conversation; Hallo? Hallo, Bill, you’ll never guess who I talked to today.. I don’t know why, I just thought I should call her and see how she s doing. Who? Not Kelly Ann? Bill how did you know? Yeah, and she wanted to say hi.
Bill tried not to yell into the phone, he didn’t want to show Andreas he liked her. “So, is she there?” he asked, trying to sound casual. “No, we met at the café where I met you, and she said to say hi to you from her.” A million question and thoughts barricaded his mind as feelings did in his heart. Say hi to you.. was you plural meaning the band and did it mean Bill? Did she asked about him? Did she remember him and thing of him as he thought of her? How was she? Could she probably like him> He doubted that highly.. So many fans wanted him and yet the one girl he rreally like didn’t like him back.. Not that he could ever tell her and maybe know what she felt.. she probably thought of him as a friend and nothing else.. “Bill? Are you there?” Andreas said into the phone as silence followed. “uh, yeah sure. Sorry, so how is she?” he asked, his tone perfectly normal “Good good” she s crazy about you, hurting inside still somehow hanging on to a thread of hope that you’ll someday realize and maybe possibly like her just a tiny fraction of how much she loves you but she s just peachy really he thought sarcastically but said nothing else. Bill wanted to see her again so badly.. “good, so um.. Tell her to come round, we ll have like a get together you her and the band” he said really just wanting to meet her alone but he couldn’t admit it.. Andreas sighed “Yeah sur e I’ll tell here.. I should get paid for this, I feel like I am a messenger or something” he joked Bill grinned “Thanks, I’ll go tell the others” he said “Bye bye, and thanks so much” “Bye” Andreas echoed and hung up.
Andreas sat on his couch, and dialed her number once more.
Kelly picked up the ohone “Hello?” she said “Hallo” came a reply from Andreas, making her smile softly. “So whats up?” she asked “I called Bill, said you said hi, and..” “thank you so much! “ she squeeled barely giving him time to continue “And he said you should come over some time for like a get together with the band, just like old time” He said, waiting to see how she would react. Silence filled the air as excitement pulsed through her body “Are you kidding? Seriously? Sure, this is.. this is..” she could barely speak properly, she wanted to scream happily. “this is crazy!” she finished meaning it in a good way “Yeah, it is” he said, not in the same way as her. “So, I’ll see ya, then, ok?” he said “Yeah” she said and they hung up.. | |
| | | xXxKirstyxXx
Number of posts : 550 Age : 29 Location : Zabbar Job/hobbies : listening music,[TH]out,laugh xD etc.. Humor : always laughing xD Registration date : 2008-04-05
| Subject: Re: Durch den Monsun. - 8 th chappie!!! Sat Aug 16 2008, 12:21 | |
| yay!!! finally Bill and Kelly-Ann will meet very cool chapter more when you can pls _________________ I'm addicted to drugs...I mean...TOKIO HOTEL | |
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