Haunted Scream

This is kind of a sequel to the Girlfriend News...
You know, I could write something along the lines of her ending up in hospital, and bill would spend a lot of time there cuz he felt guilty. In the meantime the girl friend would get jealous and they would have fights and they would break up. Eventually he would fall in love with her.
Or I could say that it was all a dream, and he never had a girlfriend.
I could say that she got to be really good friends with them (after she healed) and realized that Gustav was really the one for her.
But instead;

Chapter One – The mirror

He looked in the mirror, and there it was again.. that whisper. “Bill.. Bill..” it was melodious.. but it sent shivers up and down his spine. He knew that voice. It could never fade away from his memories. Or that face, and those eyes.. it was like he could almost see her there again.
He was. The mirror no longer reflected his perfectly structured face.. Now it held the image of her. The black silky hair was flat and lifeless, her lips were almost as pale as her face. Her collar bones jotted out, as if desperately trying to break out of her skin.
Her gaze was casted downwards, and all seemed dead, until her eyes rose to meet his.
His breath caught in his throat, but he couldn’t have said that he hadn’t been expecting to see her today.
“Bill..”
Her eyes were full of fire, hatred, sorrow, pain, frustration, regression, anger, but what hurt him the most was one tiny flicker in her eyes. One different feeling.. Love.
“Bill..”
He could say nothing back.
“Bill.. answer me!” her voice echoed all the pain inside her. “I never thought it would end like this.. “ she said softly, not giving him a chance to reply this time.
“I thought we were going to live happily, I was ready to do anything. Anything for you. But then, it was all ruined. It was all gone, you were gone. I didn’t mean to jump.. it was just too much to live with. I mean, I think I knew that is was almost impossible to have you. But there was always that tiny amount of hope… it was all that kept me going. It was like a tiny flame, still lighting my life. And then, your word… they blew out that flame, and there was nothing else. I was dead inside and all that was left was to die on the outside also. So I did. But not before I met you, Bill Kaulitz.”

u always leave me breathless with your stories.
i honestly cant thank u enough for writing them.

Interesting. Dark and slightly creepy but definitely very different!!! Sent shivers up my spine and then some!

thanks for the comments!

Chapter two – Don’t you want that?
Her voice had by now turned bitter and cold.
“Do you even know what you did to me? You killed me.. I loved you, I truly did, Bill. I loved you, but you didn’t love me. It’s not your fault, you never knew me… You never knew me, and yet you told me you’d be there for me. You told me our love would live… At least that’s what I thought you were telling me. But you weren’t. You were singing.. you were saying all that. But not to me. I was so naïve.. so stupid.”
She pressed her palm against the cold surface.

Bill had tears in his eyes, he felt like she was right. He was so shocked, how could he have done that to her, and even to others? Without thinking, he placed his own palm against hers. It wasn’t hard. It felt like she was really there… Without warning, her fingers slipped between his own, clasping his hand in hers.

She suddenly slipped out foot out of the mirror, and the rest of her body followed. The air around her was frozen, and she smiled at him. “We can be together, Bill.. Don’t you want that?”
Bill was terrified, but he knew he had asked for it. Today was one exact year past her death day. That day, he was getting married.
He didn’t know what had made him chose that particular day…
“What do you mean?”
“We can be together.. I’m here now, but only for a small while… Bill.. don’t you want that?”
He looked at her, “I have found the one I love, I’m sorry”
“You’re sorry… I don’t think you are, Bill”

Ooo, interesting...weird...creepy...heart wrenching...the makings of a good story all round!!!! Loved it!

ooh! post more....my eyes are bilging out and i am jumping with excitement!

last part guys.. im sorry it was so short.. you ll see why...
warning - i was very angry when i wrote this.. its.. horrible.. i dont even wanna read it myself..

Chapter three - Scream
She turned back to the mirror, and all it reflected was him. “I’m not even here Bill.. I wonder what they’ll say when they find you. When they find your body..” she said, her voice sweet yet horribly icy. She smashed the mirror as her fist flew through it. She knelt down and picked up a piece…
“What are you doing?” he asked shaking all over, and yet he seemed to be paralyzed.. rooted to the spot. Her fingers, enslaving the piece of broken mirror inside them, moved closer to him.
He felt the edge of it cutting through his soft skin.
“Scream.. Till you feel it..”
Bill couldn’t believe it. Why wasn’t his body responding? Why couldn’t he run?
“Scream.. till you believe it”
The pain surged through his body as she slowly and torturously pushed it deeper.
“Scream.. and when it hurts you.. Scream it out aloud”
As the last word escaped her lips, she pushed with all her might, and blood covered her hands.
His body dropped to the floor, shaking and his eyes stared into space. Blood poured out of the wound, and pain pulsed throughout his entire body. She took his hand, and in unison they whispered one last word before he died.
“Scream..”

That was disturbing as hell and yet so captivating!!!! Well written and very interesting!

WOW *0*
that was scary
it was too damn scary.
and i loved it.

Disturbing but.. WHY DID SHE KILL BILL?? not really his fault you know.

i dont know.. i know its not his fault, but even though it wasnt he really hurt her..
I write poems and fanfics (now) and i finish them, and most of the time i never read them again. I have a feeling, write it down, but i dont try to understand myself. So um.. eah, i dont know why she killed Bill.

XMissXKaulitzX89X wrote:

i dont know.. i know its not his fault, but even though it wasnt he really hurt her..
I write poems and fanfics (now) and i finish them, and most of the time i never read them again. I have a feeling, write it down, but i dont try to understand myself. So um.. eah, i dont know why she killed Bill.

I see, I see.

Just read the 3 chapterz... beautifully written.. sad.. but i like them..

And the part of the Scream lyrics...i love it

poor bill

omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!! charlene im crying because of u.........................
its a sad story but i luv it a lot!!!!!!! its well written and its fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!

im sory i didnt read it befrore!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! really