You Shook Me All Night Long (PART 13)

dedicated especially to chloe although its not as good as her chapter

Helen Still shocked that Bill wants a private dance with her goes over to the booth the now four remaining guys sat in.

“Hey” She whispered from behind him before she lifted up her leg on to his knee.

“Yes?” Bill said all serious

“Follow me!” She said giving him her hand

She led him into this dark room which only had two light bulbs on top of this huge lounge

She started to dance and slide down his body then pushed him flirtatiously on this sofa. She went for his lips but he rejected.

“What’s your problem? It’s the second time I’ve tried to make a move and you rejected!” She said in disappointment as all the happy emoticons from before turn to sad ones.

He did not talk he just put his head down and sighed.

“I thought you asked for a private dance; Well at least that’s what your brother said!?”

“Oh Tom!” Bill said looking up to the gorgeous girl! “I’m sorry”

“It’s okay I can go!” She said with a soft voice! As she headed for the door!

“Wait!” He said lifting his head up slightly. She looked back at him as he continued “You don’t have to go!”

“Well remember I have a job!” She said sarcastically!

“Yes and it’s to keep the lads pleased right?!” Bill said cutely

“Yes bu-” Bill cut her off instantly

“You can please me by talking with me!”

“Talk about what?” She said looking weirdly

“This may sound kinda creepy but I want to get to know you!”

“Hmm and that would be why exactly?!” She said still being as sarcastic

“You are hard to get to know aren’t you?!” Bill guessed

“What do you want to know!?”

“Your name for instants!?”

“Why would I tell you that? I’m Venom ”

“Are you going to make it so hard for me!?” Bill pleaded

“Okay fine, I’m Helen”

“Well, I’m Bill”

“Yeah I know! =)”

“So how long have you been a strip-”

“Exotic dancer please….” She looked weirdly flirtatious at him “5 years, but my sister has been an exotic dancer for 12 years though”

“Sweet to seem more experienced, You look beautiful by the way”

“Thanks!” She said trying to blush

“Ha-ha as if nobody has told you that before”

“Well actually no, nobody has told me that and meant it!”

“Are you seeing anyone?” He asked her

“Well until right now no =)” She winked

“I’d love to take you out for dinner and get to know you better”

“You would?”

“Aha” Bill said looking at her than leaned forward for a kiss

She passionately kissed him back their kiss tasted long enough that they ended up half naked.

“So is it okay to ask, why did you want to talk?”

“Because you caught my eye yesterday and if you read about me I’m not in the lap dance and bye bye thing.”

“Ah yes I know I know”

“So how about that dance?!” Bill said looking at her

“Sure?” She grinned “anything to please a client” She winked

She danced the night away for both of them and forgot about her bar job. xD

AWW!! sweet little Bill, so innocent and yet he has a devious side to him Loved it Kim!!!!! I'm officially dying over it!!!

wow these last two chapters were really cool i cant find the exact words to describe them
they were both very nice. well done cant wait till more comes....

I was dead bored today so I made a banner of sorts for this!! It's not that good really but I was bored xD Let me know what you guys think! And another chapter should come soon!

okay i LOVE this one too!

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
and i like the poater as well.

but as always POST MORE SILLY!

ah fuck

i agree with Pav...


but i am currently drooling over her signature picture...

NAISNAISNAIS

I like both chappies!!!!!! Sry that i didn't comment before but I haven't been online lately xd Mehr biteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

O.o

You two amaze me...

This one is so good =DDD

I was like, I wanna read something by Chloe...and the title grabbed my eye 'cause I love that song =D

And Kim why didn't you ever wrote any more of those fan fics I LOVED by you ='[

CORRECTION: I LOVE by you

You meanie *sniff*

I'm being a meanie now by not posting some juicy chapters of S*x Buddy =P [gah been so long but anyway xP] && the juicyness =PPP...

Gah I WANT MORE!!! GET IT!! XP...sorry I'm in fanfiction mode...I WANNA READ SO MUCH TODAY xD

xDarkening.Angelx wrote:

O.o

You two amaze me...

This one is so good =DDD

I was like, I wanna read something by Chloe...and the title grabbed my eye 'cause I love that song =D

And Kim why didn't you ever wrote any more of those fan fics I LOVED by you ='[

CORRECTION: I LOVE by you

You meanie *sniff*

I'm being a meanie now by not posting some juicy chapters of S*x Buddy =P [gah been so long but anyway xP] && the juicyness =PPP...

Gah I WANT MORE!!! GET IT!! XP...sorry I'm in fanfiction mode...I WANNA READ SO MUCH TODAY xD

pwssssssssss mehrrr on S*X buddy!!!!!!!!!!!!! BITTE BITTE

For Kim. I told you this was mostly filler but you still pushed and this was all I got, enjoy!! Thanks for the comments everyone!!

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As the sun rose high over Berlin, the boys finally stumbled from the club, both in a pleasant daze. David, Gustav and Georg had left long ago, when the club had closed. Knowing the owner and her most prized dancer had certainly been a bonus for the two, enabling them to stay long after the last customers had left and the doors had shut to the outside world.

Bill’s hair clung to his forehead in sweaty tendrils and his make up had run during the night. Though the club may be air-conditioned, Venom or Helena certainly knew how to turn up the heat.

Tom wasn’t faring much better. Loose strands of hair had slipped out from the tight twirls of his dreadlocks, standing up all over the place, plastered to his forehead with sweat. He was tempted to remove both caps he wore as well as one of his two t-shirts but he was wary of attracting attention to himself. Though he’d certainly removed them for Toxic.

They made their way back to their house in silence, still too dazed to speak. Stumbling through the door, both made their way to the kitchen. Though it had been a full twenty-four hours since they’d last slept, the previous night still weight heavy on their minds so both knew sleep would be impossible.

“How did your dance go?” Tom asked, grinning at his brother as Bill eagerly gulped down a tall glass of icy water.

“Just fine, thank you very much,” Bill said. “There was no need to get involved like that.”

“Yes because you so would’ve done something on your own,” Tom replied, rolling his eyes. “If it wasn’t for me you would’ve come home all sad and mopey with Gustav and Georg. Thanks to me you got a dance and you got laid.”

“No I didn’t,” Bill responded.

“Oh nice, you skipped the dance and got straight to it,” Tom replied, nodding in approval.

“No!” Bill exclaimed, rolling his eyes at his brother. “We didn’t do…that.”

“What the hell did you do then?” Tom asked, eyebrow raised in confusion…what else was there to do?

“We talked,” Bill sighed, as he remembered what had happened. “she gave me her number and I have to call her.”

“So you didn’t even get a dance out of her?” Tom asked, aghast.

“I never said that,” Bill replied, blushing crimson.

“Bill!” Tom exclaimed, smiling brilliantly at his brother. “I knew you had it in you.”

“Enough about me!” Bill said, wanting to divert attention away from himself. “what happened with you and Toxic?”

“Oh man, Bill, seriously, I’ve never been with a woman like that before,” Tom exclaimed, letting his eyes roll back as a wave of residual pleasure coursed through him.

“so out of all your other conquests, she’s the best?” Bill questioned.

“She blew all the others out of the water…literally,” Tom replied. “Her hands, her mouth, her body…everything about her was just….”

He whistled in response and he shook slightly with the thought of her and what she’d done. He let his hand dance down across his chest as his mind drifted back to the way she’d moved, the way she’d touched, licked, kissed…

“EW! Tom!” Bill suddenly exclaimed, breaking through his thoughts. “Seriously, if you’re that hot for her, go back and fuck her some more, I don’t want to sit here and watch you give yourself a one man show thank you very much!”

“Then don’t want,” Tom replied smartly. “Like I don’t make you hot as well.”

“Yes…I really fantasize about my brother. You make me so hot for you Tomi,” Bill replied, rolling his eyes. “All you need is some stiletto heels and leather skirts and you could be the one I fantasize about every night.”

“No, that would be Venom,” Tom replied, smirking.

“Her name’s Helena,” Bill replied, poking his tongue out at him.

“I prefer Venom,” Tom mused. “It has a darker more mysterious ring to it. But then, Toxic’s the one who caught my attention…over and over…”

“I bet you don’t even know her real name,” Bill scoffed.

“I do actually, it’s Kim,” Tom replied smugly. “And I have her phone number. She told me to call her any time, day or night with whatever…need…I might have.”

“Then call her now you horn dog, or go to your own room,” Bill said, rolling his eyes. “Keep the noise down will ya, not the kind of noises I like to hear coming from my own brother’s room!”

“Yes, because I love hearing them coming from mine!” Tom replied, shaking his head. “You’re not as quiet or as innocent as you pretend to be little brother.”

Bill flushed scarlet and turned on his heel, shaking his head before muttering a quite “night” and heading off to bed. Tom grinned, following in Bill’s footsteps, heading to his own room instead, head full of Toxic thoughts…

…oh he’d have to call her soon, there was no way he’d last much longer like this.

before this i was tired as hell trying to get chloe to write it and OMFGGGGGGG!!!

I AWAKE BUT DEADDDDDDD


my chp will be coming soon

oh i love this chapter...damn you chlo...even ur fillers are so awesome!

P.s Sav ...thank you...btw, Chloe found it for me..heeh...luv ya chlo...LOADS!

WOOOOOOOOOOT WOOOOOOOOOOOT


another update from the soon to be Author herself.... CHLOE TESTA!!!!


xD


ah... naisnaisnais... WHAT STORY NEXT CHLOE?! lol


p.s. Pav, no problemo

Georg phoned Tom at 3 p.m. Yet he was still sleeping and nothing could wake Tom up so Georg decided to phone Bill instead.

“Mm is it you Helena??” Bill muttered as he got the phone.

“No dumb ass it’s Georg since when has my voice turned into a woman’s voice!??”

Bill woke up shocked and tired to turn this into a joke.

“I’m kidding ha-ha?”

“Me and ‘Stav are on our way over to your house”

“Hmm okay see you soon!”

Bill got up from his bed shaking his head ‘What is this girl doing to me!!!’ he thought.

He grabbed his phone and started pressing buttons writing a message that said… “Hey Helena this is Bill, How about that dinner tonight. I can’t stop thinking about you”

Tom entered the room as Bill was about to press the send button.

“Bill its 3 why didn’t you wake me up!?”

Bill just stared at his phone as Tom nudged him again.

“Bill?? Will you listen to me?”

Bill shook his head and closed his phone not sending the message.

“What Tom??”

“Why didn’t you wake me up!?”

“I just woke up myself! With a phone call from Georg. Him and Gustav are on their way” As they headed down to the kitchen Georg and Gustav arrived.

“Hey guys” Georg said throwing himself on the sofa.

“Where did you guys disappear to last night well we can guess what happened to Bill but Tom you had to go to the loo!”

“Ja he got bust with Toxic!”

“NO?!” Georg said finding it hard to believe.

“And Bill you got some from hat striper girl!??” Said Gustav.

“No! And she’s not a stripper she’s an exotic dancer and her name is Helena!!”

“Ohhhh that what this morning was all about then!” said Georg.

“WHAT??!” Tom said interested to listen to what had happened.

“Well...” Georg paused and looked at Bill as Bill’s eyes opened wide! “ I called Bill this morning and Bill said ‘Helena is that you?’”

Bill puffed as he thought Georg wouldn’t bring this up!

“He just met this girl and she’s driving him crazy!”

Bill went to the kitchen as he noticed his phone vibrating. He opened the phone and saw a number he didn’t recognize he opened the text and all there was written was.
“Hey honey are you still thinking of me?? .x.H.x.

KIIIIIIIIIM!!!! more....pleeeeeease!!!

Oh. these chapters are amazing.
more plsssssssssssssss
*gets on her knee and begs*

wwwwwhhhhhhhhhhhhhheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee


MORE!

*dies from Pav's sig*

^^ trust me everytime i see it, i die myself!

So it's only a little chapter, just a filler for Kim so she knows how irritating little chapters are....henceforht I want a longer chapter!!! (got it, Kim?)

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“So Tom,” Georg began once Bill had disappeared. “Now Bill’s vanished…quick! Details of last night!”

“Boys, there are things that girl did to me that no girl ever has before!” he said, grinning triumphantly at Georg and Gustav. “You two wouldn’t know what I mean, you’re so uneducated.”

Georg and Gustav stared on, waiting for him to continue.

“Seriously, pole dancers are the way to go…they certainly know how to handle a pole,” he replied, smirking.

“Tom, you amaze me,” Georg said, shaking his head in wonder. “So, how did she take it, knowing she’d never see you again? I can’t imagine she cried like that creepy chick you fucked in California.”

“Amanda,” Tom replied, shuddering.

“So you remember her name?” Georg noted.

“Yeah, to make sure I never run into her again…I thought she’d cut my balls off when I tried to leave! Seriously, crap fuck, not worth the hassle at all,” Tom shuddered once again. “Actually, I’m thinking of seeing Toxic again.”

“You are?!” Gustav and Georg gasped.

“Are you…dating her?” Gustav asked. “Should we warn the fangirls?”

“I’m not dating her,” Tom replied, shaking his head gently. “I’m just seeing her again…I couldn’t get enough of her.”

“Oh so like…a regular fuck buddy?” Georg said.

“Pretty much,” Tom said, leaning back against the couch, smirking at the two. “She was hooked on me, needless to say, I rocked her world…Tom Kaulitz knows how to please all the women, even those who might be on a similar level as me.”

“You are so full of yourself,” Georg replied, throwing a cushion at Tom.

“I only speak the truth,” he shrugged in response. “You’re just jealous because you’ve always wanted me…sorry, you’ll never get me, I’m all for the ladies.”

“Oh…I’m so hurt,” Georg replied, rolling his eyes. “When are you seeing her again?”

“Whenever I want,” Tom said. “We play by my rules.”

“Is that so?” Gustav asked. “Does she know that?”

“Doesn’t matter, it’s what I want, gotta show them whose boss early on you see,” Tom said, raising an eyebrow.

“Tom…she’s not one of your groupies, you do know that…right?” Georg asked.

“And?”

“Well she probably won’t take your shit,” Georg supplied.

“We’ll see,” Tom replied, full of confidence. “just wait and see.”

“Ok…we’ll wait and see,” Georg agreed. He had a feeling that, for once, cocky Tom Kaulitz would be brought down a few pegs and taught a valuable lesson.

*tries to breath*

wow
i think Tom will have a surprise as KIM/HELENA wont let him be the boss
hmm... i'll guess i'll wait and see (im sure ill do it afterall its worth it)

i love thAT LAST LINE!

tom needs a lesson for sure...
MORE NO!!!!!!!

So its supposed to be KIM's turn to write the next chapter BUT NO she decided I would have to write it so here we go...not that it will please her

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Bill’s heart leapt into his throat as he re-read the message for the hundredth time. It was her; finally, a message from her. He sat down heavily on a chair and composed himself, trying desperately to think up the perfect reply.

In the other room, Georg and Gustav had just left, leaving Tom to his own devices. Deciding he was in need of something Toxic, he grabbed his phone and dialed a familiar number. After five rings, she finally picked up.

“Hello?” she said, sounding slightly out of breath.

“Hey baby, its me,” he said, voice smooth like silk. “I’ve been thinking about you; you been thinking about me?”

“Um…not really,” she replied honestly. “Sorry, its been a busy day.”

“Oh,” Tom said, flabbergasted. “Um…well, was wondering if you wanted to meet up?”

“When?” came her no nonsense response.

“Now?” he said, though it came out as more of a question.

“Sorry, I can’t I’m busy helping Helena perfect a new routine, maybe later.” He heard the finality in her voice and knew she was about to hang up.

“Wait!” he called anxiously.

“What?” she asked, slightly irritated.

“Um…can I maybe come down and see you?” he asked…she was making him nervous, something he wasn’t used to.

“Let me ask Helena, its her practice after all.” He could hear muffled shouting in the background. “Ok, she said you can come…bring Bill…she wants his opinion on the new routine.”

Before he could respond, she hung up on him. He huffed in annoyance and went to grab Bill, eager to get to the undoubtedly empty club.

In said club, Kim squealed and raced over to where Helena stood, listening to the beat of the music.

“Oh my god!” Kim exclaimed.

“What?” Helena asked, looking at her sister in shock.

“Tom’s coming down!! And he seemed really eager to see me!” she bounced around as she spoke, barely able to contain her excitement.

“Oh that’s great!” Helena replied. “So I’m guessing I’ll be practicing alone for a while.”

“No…he’s bringing Bill down,” Kim replied, winking at Helena…she hadn’t asked for her permission in actual fact.

“He’s what?” Helena exclaimed, looking at her sister in shock. “He’s coming here, now? My routine is awful though! And I look like shit! Fuck I need a shower…and some make up! And damn it, clean clothes!”

“Oh come on…Bill won’t be able to stay away from you…just look at you,” Kim said, rolling her eyes. “Highest heels known to man, the shortest shorts I’ve ever seen, a little almost see through top and you’re all sweaty and hot after a work out…I doubt he’ll care about anything else.”

Helena dithered nervously as Kim reassured her Bill wouldn’t care in the slightest about anything as trivial as a bad routine.

What seemed like minutes later, a loud pounding sound filled the room.

“He’s here!” Kim exclaimed nervously. She smoothed her hair down and arranged herself, before striding purposely over to the door, flinging it open and ushering the Kaulitz twins into the club.

Immediately Bill made a bee-line for the stage where Helena stood, leaning against the brass pole, eyebrow raised seductively.

“Hey stud,” she said, grinning at him. “Didn’t think I’d be seeing you today.”

“Didn’t think I’d see you either,” he replied, smiling at her. “Am I disturbing you?”

“Not really, I’m just practicing a new routine,” Helena replied coyly. “I can stop for a while if you want.”

“Oh no, don’t stop for me, I’ll just sit and watch,” Bill said, settling into a booth in front of the stage.

She nodded and nervously turned away from him, standing beside the pole, waiting for the music to start. She threw a seductive glance his way before turning back to the pole.

’I love myself, I want you to love me’

Grasping onto the pole, she began to dance. Her body shimmied and swayed to the music, captivating Bill’s attention.

‘When I think about you I touch myself’

Her hands slid down her body, grasping, touching, and caressing every inch of smooth, pale skin. Bill’s eyes focused upon her hands, following every movement, desperately wishing it was his own hands touching her like that.

’Get down on my knees I’d do anything for you’

She dropped to her knees and crawled across the stage, shaking her shoulders and rolling around. Her body swayed and her position, upon her knees, kneeling before him, was full of promise.

I don’t want anybody else

She pointed at him as she swayed, mouthing the words before licking her lips seductively. She last few notes of the hypnotic song filled the club as she completed her last few moves up against the pole, driving Bill crazy.

She was panting slightly as the song finished, out of breath and kind of nervous regarding his reaction. She slid off the stage and strode towards him, swaying her hips and emphasizing every movement.

“What do you think?” she asked, sitting down beside him, crossing her legs. His eyes swept up over the pale, creamy skin; her legs seemed endless in the tiny shorts.

“I think that is too hot for you to perform for anyone else,” Bill replied, voice shaking as he spoke. He coughed once to clear his throat.

“I’ll take that as a compliment,” she said with a wink.

“You really should,” Bill nodded in approval. “It was…um…do you want to go somewhere?”

“For what?” she asked, smirking at him.

“To talk and just hang out,” Bill responded, cheeks tinting pink.

“Sorry babe, can’t,” Helena replied. “I’ve got to show Kim the routine, make sure she approves; I debut with it tonight.”

“Well, are you free tomorrow night?” he asked.

“Not before eleven, no,” she responded. “I work every night except Wednesdays and Sundays; that’s ladies night…male dancers!”

“So I won’t see you till after eleven?” Bill asked, sounding hurt.

“Well…you can see me now if you want,” she said. “You don’t have to go, you just have to sit and watch me perform unfortunately.”

“Don’t worry, I don’t see it as unfortunately,” he replied. “Do you have any other routines to show me?”

“Well…I suppose my lap dance needs some fine tuning,” she said coyly.

“Oh I’m definitely the man to practice on,” came his reply, smirking devilishly.

Oh God! That was awesome....
Want more NOW!!!
So one of you two *(i guess its Kim's turn though)* REPLY IMMEDIATELY
tnx