Lyrics for Bill [pls comment on it]

Hey th fans! A few months ago I've wrote a lyrics to Bill and decided to post it here. pls tell me what you think about it. I just love writing lyrics. It is called 'There for me'.

Btw this is more a lyrics than a poem. lol


When obstacles become impossible to overcome
You are the person whom I'd start searching for
I am always willing to hear your voice
As I dream of being there beside you
My hands are killing me to touch you
As my lips are longing for your healing kiss.

[chorus]
Wanting to feel your morphined lips against mine
Wanting to be caressed by your touch
Wanting to be held in your arms
As I need you to be there for me.

When I'm feeling left alone, I know you're there for me
Managing this life is hard without you
Haunted by your deep darkened eyes
As your piercing gaze keeps me attracted to you
Your sweet warm smile offers me comfort and enlightens my heart
When I hear your voice, it fills me with courage and wipe my tears away.

[chorus]
Wanting to feel your morphined lips against mine
Wanting to be caressed by your touch
Wanting to be held in your arms
As I need you to be there for me.


[ending]
Deep in my heart you'll be kept
Your inspiring soul I'll cherish forever.

love it, dude just love it!!

thanks alot

are you coming to the next meeting ?

oh you're not from Malta
sorry didn't see that the first thing

<3 those lyrics

gr8 job =]]